noynekker Posted May 16, 2020 Share Posted May 16, 2020 (edited) Okay, possible 3 minute love song . . . but I'm not even sure she really likes me yet, Lol . . . but, would be great to hear your mix, song etc. ideas in case she does . . . Edited July 20, 2020 by noynekker re-upload link Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted May 17, 2020 Share Posted May 17, 2020 I like how this song builds, esp the harmonies. You have a unique voice, did you tune much? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted May 17, 2020 Author Share Posted May 17, 2020 Thanks for responding David . . . yes, FYI, the lead vocal took a lot of practice, and needed a few "tweaks" . . . the harmonies are extrapolated from that . . . it's currently at the demo songwriting stage, so the harmony vocals will eventually get done and sung again . . . if she really loves me . . . if not, might end up on the scrap heap with all the others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted May 17, 2020 Share Posted May 17, 2020 Seemed like the voc was panning L and R, but maybe that's the stereo separation? Kind of a nice effect though. Might be a bit too much treatment on the vocal, couple of glitches here and there. Writing a song for a woman goes way beyond a card and flowers. So don't worry about it, she'll like you. ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted May 17, 2020 Author Share Posted May 17, 2020 Hi bjornpdx . . . thanks for your insights and encouragement. I’ll have a look at the panning issue, wasn’t intending for that to happen, though, I am always trying different vocal fx chain experiments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted May 18, 2020 Share Posted May 18, 2020 (edited) On 5/16/2020 at 10:11 PM, bjornpdx said: Might be a bit too much treatment on the vocal Yeah but On 5/16/2020 at 5:49 PM, noynekker said: it's currently at the demo songwriting stage Stay with it, you'll get it there. On 5/16/2020 at 5:49 PM, noynekker said: if she really loves me Stay with it either way.... t Edited May 18, 2020 by DeeringAmps spelling Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted May 18, 2020 Author Share Posted May 18, 2020 26 minutes ago, DeeringAmps said: Yeah but Stay with it, you'll get it there. Stay with it either way.... t Yes, thank you DeeringAmps . . . I've always subscribed to the rule "Art is never finished, only abandoned" . . . same goes for love I guess 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted May 20, 2020 Share Posted May 20, 2020 Right on! It's got a great beat, very "up" . . . nice vocals! Any chance, for example at :32, the first "you" in your choruses, sustaining that into a "yoouuuuuuu" rather than truncating it? Hey it just occurred to me and not all my ideas are winners. Super cool bass line!!! Now, if I were you, I wouldn't feel compelled to mention that "she's not Aprhodite" but that's none of my business!!! nice tune indeed, let the games begin! Have fun and will listen for the update! cheers, -Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted May 21, 2020 Author Share Posted May 21, 2020 On 5/19/2020 at 8:17 PM, emeraldsoul said: Right on! It's got a great beat, very "up" . . . nice vocals! Any chance, for example at :32, the first "you" in your choruses, sustaining that into a "yoouuuuuuu" rather than truncating it? Hey it just occurred to me and not all my ideas are winners. Super cool bass line!!! Now, if I were you, I wouldn't feel compelled to mention that "she's not Aprhodite" but that's none of my business!!! nice tune indeed, let the games begin! Have fun and will listen for the update! cheers, -Tom Hi Tom . . . thanks for the listen, so impressed by your very constructive comments, might just try those out . . . so how it goes. As for the Aprhodite bit at the end, well it's kind of the premise of the idea, not sure I can soften it to be "you're kind of like Aphrodite" . . . we're older, wiser . . . it is what it is. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted May 21, 2020 Share Posted May 21, 2020 I think it's a cool song - I enjoyed your vocal - and the lyrics were quite good. The mix sounds pretty good to me - no crits. I really liked the tone of the acoustic guitar - it sounded quite nice in the mix. Nice job overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted May 22, 2020 Author Share Posted May 22, 2020 Thank you Douglas . . . glad you liked it so far, I've been working on it some more and one thing I want to do is get the acoustic guitar tighter, without wrecking the tone of course ! Thanks for having a listen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted May 22, 2020 Share Posted May 22, 2020 I really like this cool, upbeat song! The mix is clean and wide, and everything is in its place. You have a terrific voice which conveys your message very well. In fact, I like it so much that I think that you could mix the vocals a db or two louder to make this larger than life. Keep us posted! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noynekker Posted May 23, 2020 Author Share Posted May 23, 2020 21 hours ago, Lynn said: I really like this cool, upbeat song! The mix is clean and wide, and everything is in its place. You have a terrific voice which conveys your message very well. In fact, I like it so much that I think that you could mix the vocals a db or two louder to make this larger than life. Keep us posted! Hi Lynn . . . you're totally right about the vocals needing a boost in the mix, I've uploaded a new version with that (and a few other things) in mind . . . thank you so much for listening and commenting ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted May 24, 2020 Share Posted May 24, 2020 I´m just not qualified to comment on the technical side of this which basicaly means I´m a joe bloggs sort of guy so I just listen to the tune and i thought it was great espescally the chorus ..nice one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted May 24, 2020 Share Posted May 24, 2020 Upbeat song that is coming one well, will listen out for the more finalised version, thanks for sharing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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