noynekker Posted March 27, 2020 Posted March 27, 2020 (edited) . . . just a simple song to stir the debate, regarding if there's anything really there when we look deep inside ourselves . . . oh, and any mixing tips and comments are always welcome :0 Edited July 20, 2020 by noynekker re-upload link 1
David Sprouse Posted March 27, 2020 Posted March 27, 2020 (edited) Love your voice. Well written song. Edited March 27, 2020 by David Sprouse
DeeringAmps Posted March 28, 2020 Posted March 28, 2020 (edited) 13 hours ago, David Sprouse said: Love your voice Yeah, well sung! Is the acoustic guitar just a little dry? 19 hours ago, noynekker said: anything really there? Is there anybody out there... Life is an illusion; right? ? I think you're done, print it! Bring us some more please! t I'd like it twice, but we can't do that... Edited March 28, 2020 by DeeringAmps added comment
noynekker Posted March 28, 2020 Author Posted March 28, 2020 Hi, and thanks for the comments @David Sprouse . . . thanks, means a lot to a songwriter @ DeeringAmps . . . thanking you . . . if life were just an illusion, we might all be a bit deluded, right ? 1
Douglas Kirby Posted March 28, 2020 Posted March 28, 2020 I enjoyed listening to this one - "Spirit Wind" is a cool hook and title. I liked your vocal as well. I thought the mix sounded quite good to my ears.
chuckebaby Posted March 28, 2020 Posted March 28, 2020 I've read a lot of your comments but have never listened to your music. Great voice man. I hear so many different styles in it, you seemed to have combined them all to make your own originality. As for the song as a whole, great mix, great songwriting. Drums might be able to come up a little bit but you know im sire you have considered this and sometimes when you bring other things up in the mix, other critical parts get lost, so good compromise. This is really good.
Guest Posted March 28, 2020 Posted March 28, 2020 Agree - cracking vocal and nicely crafted song. Andy
freddy j Posted March 28, 2020 Posted March 28, 2020 Excellent -- lyrics, composition, performance, mix, etc.!!! However, your vocals really stand out in this song. Well done.
PhonoBrainer Posted March 29, 2020 Posted March 29, 2020 It's a pretty darn cool delay that washes along after that lead vocal. It gets panned around so nicely. I think the mix is decent but maybe just a bit light in the kick/bass dept. The song itself is performed with passion and is totally solid. Nice one!
Makke Posted April 16, 2020 Posted April 16, 2020 Well written and arranged beautiful song. Great vocals and record overall. Sounds good.
bjornpdx Posted April 17, 2020 Posted April 17, 2020 This has the two things I always look for in a song - good lyrics and good melody. In this song the melody stays with you for a while after the first listen which is a huge thumbs up from me. Great job!
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