DeeringAmps Posted March 9, 2020 Share Posted March 9, 2020 (edited) Normally I would never post something so incomplete, but I'm looking for a little collaboration. WARNING: No spit, no polish, this thing is rough as a cob! This is an afternoon's work, of roughly cobbled together performances, looped to sketch out the tune. I think the title reveals the content, so if you're not a fan, you are at least forewarned... JOEMENTUM Bjorn's suggested lyrics are included in the track below: Hope we were "close" enough Bjorn!JOEMENTUM-Bjorn's Alt Track t Edited March 19, 2020 by DeeringAmps added content 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted March 9, 2020 Share Posted March 9, 2020 hello Tom, I don't think I'm the guy for this project, it would turn down the wrong lane and you would lose the base you are messaging. With that in mind, I do love the guitar tone, and I think the tune stands on it's own as is. I like the vocals out front too, but the guitar is great. Is that through one of your amps! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted March 9, 2020 Author Share Posted March 9, 2020 Actually it is from the EZMIX pack. The 15 watter. It’s “quick and easy” and light on CPU. It was the first time I had plugged that guitar in, amazingly enough. One I built, a twenty year project actually; too long a story. Take care my brother, thanks for chiming in! t Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted March 9, 2020 Share Posted March 9, 2020 Tom , I know Nothing about working remotely , but if there is "anything" you think I could add to this project count me in. As a retired auto worker , and at a time when GM was acting like Gibson and bailing out on their employees and retirees (for their own benefit) Joe Biden "personally" stepped in. Feel free to pm me. mark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted March 12, 2020 Share Posted March 12, 2020 (edited) Tom, I always thought it'd be cool to have a poly tick-ally controversial song that's played at the convention. Those folks can get gigs for you if you're good to them. I know there's some CG'ers in DC that play at embassy parties etc. Eye of the Tiger is probably the most recognizable. Talk to Freddy J, the style you're after is in his WHEEL HOUSE. Edited March 12, 2020 by David Sprouse 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted March 12, 2020 Share Posted March 12, 2020 I liked the guitar riff - it's a cool rock/blues song. Send the song to Biden's campaign - maybe they'll use it? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted March 12, 2020 Author Share Posted March 12, 2020 Hey Dave & Doug, thank you both for your kind words. Got to put a little “spit & polish” on this bad boy yet; I’m working on it... t Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garybrun Posted March 12, 2020 Share Posted March 12, 2020 Look forward to you sharing the CWB files. Ill give the vocals a shot. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnbee58 Posted March 13, 2020 Share Posted March 13, 2020 (edited) What's wrong with your vocals here? Sounds fine to me as it is. The song is a goodie, but I'm sorry I don't share your political views. I'm not a Biden fan. (Not knocking you for being one though) ? ?John B PS-I agree with Doug K. Send it into JB's campaign. I could imagine them using it. The slogan JOEMENTUM is catchy. ? Edited March 13, 2020 by Johnbee58 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted March 13, 2020 Author Share Posted March 13, 2020 1 hour ago, Johnbee58 said: The slogan JOEMENTUM is catchy Can't take credit for that, but I jumped on pretty quickly. 1 hour ago, Johnbee58 said: What's wrong with your vocals here? The muse tortured me for two night running with this, then inspired me to go public. I live but to serve my queen; She shall have her way... 1 hour ago, Johnbee58 said: I'm not a Biden fan the true test of our friendship, is never having to alter our beliefs, to maintain that friendship. t remember, Ralph Murphy's law of songwriting:"we write songs about people we've never met, doing things we've never done, in places we've never been" 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted March 13, 2020 Share Posted March 13, 2020 Can I be your friend if I am completely a-poly-tickal? :D:D 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted March 13, 2020 Author Share Posted March 13, 2020 We are friends!? t Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted March 14, 2020 Share Posted March 14, 2020 t Doesn't sound rough to me. Vocal is great, maybe could use some reverb or something, maybe not. Very cool intro with the train leading into the song. "Barr the truth" I get shivers when I hear MLK speak - so inspiring. You looking for more lyrics? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted March 14, 2020 Share Posted March 14, 2020 Tom Living quite a lot of the year in South Africa, I find it hard not to view all Politicians in the same light - thieving corrupt and incompetent!! However in Barbados after about ten years of thieving corrupt and incompetent Politicians, we have a new Prime Minister (same as President sort of) and she has made a massive difference - almost restored my faith in Politicians....well not fully but getting there. I'm not really up on US Politics - have to say the last election was a surprise...think i'll leave it at that? Regards the song, love the guitar - think it would great with a bit of vox organ on the chorus Cheers Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted March 14, 2020 Author Share Posted March 14, 2020 8 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Doesn't sound rough to me Bjorn, you are too kind. 8 hours ago, bjornpdx said: You looking for more lyrics This bad boy is "public domain" now, bring it on! t Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted March 14, 2020 Author Share Posted March 14, 2020 5 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: I'm not really up on US Politics I present this only for its historical perspective, and so consider it not to be a violation of our TOS: in 1972 then President Richard Nixon was seeking re-election, he was unaffectionately known as "Tricky Dick". There were two posters out, one with the phrase "Would you buy a used car from this man?". The other "Don't change Dicks in the middle of a screw". I'll leave it to your imagination... 5 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: love the guitar Thank you, but you as well are far too kind. 5 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: a bit of vox organ on the chorus That or a grinding harp with the "whoo whoo" train sound! t the axe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted March 14, 2020 Share Posted March 14, 2020 something like this might be cool 8 minutes ago, DeeringAmps said: That or a grinding harp with the "whoo whoo" train sound maybe? On 3/12/2020 at 11:02 AM, garybrun said: Look forward to you sharing the CWB files. Ill give the vocals a shot. now that would be cool 5 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: I'm not really up on US Politics Boy, you're really missing out on something....not. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted March 14, 2020 Author Share Posted March 14, 2020 24 minutes ago, Jesse Screed said: maybe? No "maybe?" there!!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted March 15, 2020 Share Posted March 15, 2020 Tom, keep up the good work! If there ever was a time to be political, it's now. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted March 16, 2020 Share Posted March 16, 2020 our minds are made up, no more hesitation now the nation's gonna reach that destination just climb on board 'cause the movement's begun I'm talkin' about joementum something like that ? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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