nchardy Posted February 21, 2020 Share Posted February 21, 2020 (edited) New song from Morgan & Eric. Input appreciated! Thanks! https://www.bandlab.com/nchardy1963/this-gravity-494e8368?revId=c55b3072-4e54-ea11-a94c-0003ffd1c4f7 Edited February 21, 2020 by nchardy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paulo Posted February 21, 2020 Share Posted February 21, 2020 Sounds great on lappy speakers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wookiee Posted February 21, 2020 Share Posted February 21, 2020 On the Adam's her voice seems to lack weight, the rest of the mix comes across well, thanks for sharing. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nchardy Posted February 22, 2020 Author Share Posted February 22, 2020 Thanks for listening! I agree with you. Added some body to the lead vocal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beagle Posted February 22, 2020 Share Posted February 22, 2020 hey nchardy, vocals are really nice on this, but as mentioned, I'd give them more presence. I'd also suggest a little less verb, everything's dripping. the BGVs are "off" - not sure what it is - do you have a flanger on them or something? something sounds off there. nice guitar all through! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
michaelhanson Posted February 23, 2020 Share Posted February 23, 2020 I agree with the comments posted so far. Overall, really good production, but everything is really dripping in reverb. Lessening the reverb may make the Lead vocal easier to understand. The Lead vocal needs more presence and clarity. Vocalist does a nice job singing and her vocals go well with this song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted February 23, 2020 Share Posted February 23, 2020 Me Too on the comments above. The singer has an appealing unique voice but I couldn't understand most of the lyrics. Aside from that, very good production on the song. Sounds professional. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted February 24, 2020 Share Posted February 24, 2020 Push the fader up on the vocal, simple as that. Other than that, thumbs up. Oh, and better pics of the Paul. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starise Posted February 24, 2020 Share Posted February 24, 2020 nchardy, Great tune with a catchy lyrics and melody line. The vocalist does a nice job as do the accompanying vocals. Maybe you chanegd the mix since the last comments. I could hear her well in the mix, I picked up on what sounded like a flange effect aside from the guitar flange...or I guess that's what it was? It wasn't bad or overt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted February 24, 2020 Share Posted February 24, 2020 It was a cool song to listen to - but that effect on the lead vocal - not sure it works for me. Someone above mentioned it sounds like a flanger/chorus/phaser - maybe take that off the vocal. Everything else sounds fine to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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