Zargg Posted February 13, 2020 Posted February 13, 2020 (edited) Hi. This is an old song I've re-recorded and mixed during the past few days. Feedback is appreciated. All the best. Edited February 18, 2020 by Zargg New mix 1
DeeringAmps Posted February 14, 2020 Posted February 14, 2020 Ditto, although at times the kick seems to be sitting on top of the track; on the Bose cans here. Like the grinding guitars! t 2
dcumpian Posted February 14, 2020 Posted February 14, 2020 Real nice! If anything, I'd want *more* punch on the drums. Dan 2
Zargg Posted February 14, 2020 Author Posted February 14, 2020 Thanks for the positive feedback, good people ? I will try to add some more punch to the drums. All the best. 1
Zargg Posted February 14, 2020 Author Posted February 14, 2020 Added a little more punch to the drums, and have replaced the mix in the OP. 1 1
PhonoBrainer Posted February 15, 2020 Posted February 15, 2020 The song itself is very original, thoughtful, and well put together. The vocal treatments give it a lot of edge. The lyrics are quite good. I like that chromatic dropdown in the verse? towards the end. Really cool choice there! I too thought of the drums, but I think they punch OK - the issue might be a kind of flat 2D quality to the drum kit overall. I don't hear much 3D space of those drums in a room. It might be something as simple as adding back in some of the high eq on that drum kit? Did you have a black raven or similar sitting on your shoulder as you recorded this? I bet you did. Nice birdie!!! cheers. -Tom 1
Zargg Posted February 15, 2020 Author Posted February 15, 2020 Thanks for the positive and constructive feedback, Tom. I agree with you on the drums. I will go over them and tweak them some. All the best. And there's always a black raven on my shoulder.. 1
Wookiee Posted February 15, 2020 Posted February 15, 2020 Nice, a little more top would be nice but overall it works here. 1
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