Paul Bush Posted January 20, 2020 Share Posted January 20, 2020 ``Yoodoo the Voodoo ´´ I met Ermin Wärnä from Sweden on a fb music group, he had the riff and I was inspired and did the rest, this is the first colaboration Ive ever been involved with ....... such a great riff , soo easy to write over the lyrics and melody were finnished in twenty minutes , the recording however took ages (too many knobs, switches and faders) this was my real first bandlab effort, I´m slowy getting my head around the workings of this fanatsic music tool , Overwhelmed at times I have a lot to learn but still lots of fun any tips would be welcome regards Paul DB 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted January 20, 2020 Share Posted January 20, 2020 Finally, I get me some Black Pickguard Tele, so kudos from me! My only niggle, wow that kick is totally dominating the mix. I love the definition, that click; but... So thumbs up here, just work that kick into the mix. Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted January 20, 2020 Author Share Posted January 20, 2020 Yep Tom see what you mean with the kick ,Ive now listened to it again and now i´m not too happy with the whole thing , really needs tightening up , I think what is in my opinon basicaly a good song is sadly let down by the bad mix . regards Pau DB.......Ohhum back to the drawing board Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted January 20, 2020 Share Posted January 20, 2020 Lots and lots of good stuff here. The vibe comes through aplenty. It will be a good one! Yes, suck some of the low end out of that kick. Could also be a thing to try to differentiate your song away from the classic "Son of a Preacher Man" if possible. If not, I think you can get away with it. The bass guitar, in a sleazy skanky vibe such as this, could play just behind the beat a little more - just an opinion. Your bass seems to be anticipating or just ahead of the beat, in spots, which is kind of a "feel" sin, methinks. Those vocals were very, very well performed. Loved the "aaaah" at the end! will keep a listen out for the v 2.0 . . . keep at this, it's gonna be a keeper! -Tom v 2.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garybrun Posted January 20, 2020 Share Posted January 20, 2020 Son of a Preacher Man?? Nice vocals Agree with low end and bass, This could be a great track with a bit more "funk" on the bass ? well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Bush Posted January 20, 2020 Author Share Posted January 20, 2020 Thanks guys , to perfectly honest I´m not much of a Bassist, or come to that a good guitarist ,But what I `ve learned over the years, less is more and play within ones reach and play a melodic solo rather than a fast one , when I started out to write songs I´d play everything myself as I`m too empatient to wait for someone else to help me out , and yes it lacks ``funk´´ i think because I use EZ drums I´m slighty constrained to the patterns and I never seem find the perfect fills , and yes son a preacher thing definitely there I knew it and well....... ignored it .so much stuff sounds like so and so, so i take it in my stride otherwise i´d never finnish a song .. as a foot note all my songs were as `demos´intended and one day to be freshly recorded with proper musicans in a studio ( when I win the lottery) dont hold yer breath as the say. regards Paul DB Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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