Janus Beat - Beginnings of a new song

[X-53mph]

H i guys,

Some of you may remember me from the old forum. I used to post under the name 'burgerproduction'.

This track is the beginning of a song, but I quite like it as is - Made using CbB and some funky plugins that I picked up thanks to the old forum.  I've also started recording my upright piano and this track contains the first overdubs with real piano - I'm planning on taking out all the synth pianos from many of my recordings and putting in real piano - probably a fools errand, but I man needs a hobby, right?  Hope you enjoy!

 

 

[James G]

Could certainly be turned into a song, you have most of the parts there. Not keen on that loud hi-hat on the B section.

[kloon]

Agree with James on the hi-hat, other than that it sounds great.

Bring on the vocals!

[PhonoBrainer]

Great start. I'll stay tuned. Agree about the hi-hat. I like the descending chords of the "chorus" . . . the main 4 chords in the "verse" are I think kind of expected, don't know if you feel like switching it up a little there.

 

cheers,

-Tom

[X-53mph]

Thanks guys! Really appreciate it.  It's a work in progress, so I'll be going back to tame in that hi-hat (down boy! Yah! Yah!)

@emeraldsoul I know what you mean...the verses are kind of expected; I'm hoping the vocals will carry them through - However, I never rule out a rewrite.  

I'm starting to collaborate more with other vocalists, so it will be interesting to see what they come up with.  I'll let you hear when there is something new.

Cheers again!