Jesse Screed Posted January 7, 2020 Share Posted January 7, 2020 (edited) vocals mixed up Final mix https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=13973322 The American Way instigation confrontation us against them the night watch they keep they won't let us sleep no rhyme no reason, it's the season let's do it again, it's the american way (repeat this like a few times) politics lunatics all have their say in everyone minds there's a game that we play investigation of the nation something ain't right and we can't see it's double jeopardy it's the american way (repeat this like a few times) narcissism pessimism crying shame we need a hero not someone to blame our live are all portraits painted eons ago we have to remember it's not a dream it's the american way (repeat this like a few times) Edited January 11, 2020 by Jesse Screed final mix 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted January 7, 2020 Share Posted January 7, 2020 I believe you're on to something here. Very much dig the song and especially the instrumental break. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Sprouse Posted January 7, 2020 Share Posted January 7, 2020 Jesse, you sound like joe walsh singing sprechtstimme. You always amaze me. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted January 7, 2020 Author Share Posted January 7, 2020 11 hours ago, Kevin Walsh said: I believe you're on to something here. Very much dig the song and especially the instrumental break. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Thanks Kevin, I'm in the process of cleaning it up. 7 hours ago, David Sprouse said: Jesse, you sound like joe walsh singing sprechtstimme. You always amaze me. Right back at you David! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted January 8, 2020 Share Posted January 8, 2020 Aaaah, where is the mix? I tried but it was gone. Oh well, I'll try again later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted January 9, 2020 Author Share Posted January 9, 2020 3 hours ago, freddy j said: Aaaah, where is the mix? I tried but it was gone. Oh well, I'll try again later. please accept my apologies here is the it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted January 9, 2020 Share Posted January 9, 2020 Hey Jesse, As always I'm intrigued. Somebody wanted "structure", well there you are! Pull the vocal up a bit will ya, I'd like to catch all the lyrics. Ever a fan, Tom 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted January 9, 2020 Share Posted January 9, 2020 Chaos meets structure ... and the lion is tamed, I agree with DA in bringing the vocal up .. Good stuff mate Steve 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy j Posted January 9, 2020 Share Posted January 9, 2020 Thank you!!! The best yet!!! It has structure (verse, chorus, melody, etc.) but still has that Jesse touch and that is good, very good! I love it. Being a guitar guy I very much like your guitar work (just the right amount of dissonance) and the lead breaks were very cool indeed. Ya, the vocal might come up a bit but the lyrics that I did catch were very cool also. I particularly liked the ending. To me it summarized the chaos and confusion some of us are currently experiencing given the nature of things. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted January 9, 2020 Share Posted January 9, 2020 Really cool Jesse - I really enjoyed listening to this one. To me, it's got a bit of a new wave vibe to it - maybe because of all you have going on in the mix with the synths. Very original - kudos to you? My only crit - I thought the vocal should be a bit more up front in the mix - just my ears (I listened with headphones). 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjornpdx Posted January 10, 2020 Share Posted January 10, 2020 Jesse Lots of interesting things going on in there. Really like the guitar solo and the change up around 1:55. And the Hendrix nod at the end. You really do need to make the vocal stand out more. I know that I'm old and all, but I just couldn't catch much of the lyrics. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted January 11, 2020 Author Share Posted January 11, 2020 (edited) we are having mole and salad Edited January 11, 2020 by Jesse Screed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martsave martin s Posted January 11, 2020 Share Posted January 11, 2020 good tune i like the guitars tone & the kick sit well in your mix! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPAK Posted January 11, 2020 Share Posted January 11, 2020 ..... And I think the lyrics are top notch .. seems you hate praise but I can't help myself sorry Jesse ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted January 11, 2020 Author Share Posted January 11, 2020 11 hours ago, SPAK said: ..... And I think the lyrics are top notch .. seems you hate praise but I can't help myself sorry Jesse ? Hey SPAK, accept my apologies if I sounded like I hate praise, I'm not that jaded. What I meant was this was the least spontaneous thing I have done in a long time. I figured everything out before I printed it. That is all, I usually just let it fly, but this was like looking through a microscope. I respect your opinion, and all the critiques of the people who take the time to listen, This is the final mix Thanks to all for the suggestions, I couldn't have done it without you. Peace https://www.soundclick.com/artist/default.cfm?bandID=1389225 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeeringAmps Posted January 12, 2020 Share Posted January 12, 2020 That's a wrap!! T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted January 12, 2020 Author Share Posted January 12, 2020 (edited) 1 hour ago, DeeringAmps said: That's a wrap!! T I sure wish I could afford one of your amps! Thanks Tdear, I wish you the future on a bed of oysters. Edited January 12, 2020 by Jesse Screed 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pete Laramee Posted January 12, 2020 Share Posted January 12, 2020 As always, I dig it. How have you been Mr Screed? It's been a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark skinner Posted January 12, 2020 Share Posted January 12, 2020 Great timing for releasing this one ... Enjoyed it. mark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Screed Posted January 12, 2020 Author Share Posted January 12, 2020 13 hours ago, Pete Laramee said: As always, I dig it. How have you been Mr Screed? It's been a while. Peter! welcome back. I can remember the day you said you were stepping out for bit. I have been well. I hope you have been well too. 1 hour ago, mark skinner said: Great timing for releasing this one ... Enjoyed it. mark Hello Mark, it is a crazy bit of happenstance isn't it. Glad you enjoyed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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