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My god M8! you actually loathed this ? You have a few gems but this ( if sang by our old hero Lennon ) would so much be in history as one of the best. As an artist I think you always underrate yourself ... or maybe it's just me ..but' don't think so ... I have heard some dross over my long years, but this bit of work is nowhere near that sht pile. Love the vocal and really good lyrics and the fact you posted them for me to read along ...Great work 👊 Steve

What vocal range ... like t I will always love this bit'O'work 🤛 Steve SRM

I detected Peter Gabriel era Genesis personally. Nice psychedelic vibe too. Thanks guys ...

Thankyou ...George was my Fav goto early in the Beatles history ... Big compliment M8 thanks ! ATB Steve

https://www.bandlab.com/track/52a33a0dfb8d49628b79a5be883e7d3f_eca6c0369225417a816e1a3f486f0a5b From my album .... NO MASK JUST HEART

I'm always trying to bury my voice in the mix, lack of confidence. Regarding the higher notes, I think this is as good as it gets. The further I get into my 60s the more I find myself making minor adjustments with Melodyne I'm 73 so I know what your getting at, but these days you can adjust your work's pitch to suit the higher range of your voice. I have had loads of people over the years in my studios who thought they couldn't reach notes ...but with a little training ( and due to the fact they really could sing ) they achieved a great result .. try out a few la' la laaas with proper breathing to prepare your vocal chords too reach a desired pitch ... and tune your song to your voice ... after all it 's your song 😉 Again .. good work ATB Steve

To my ears this sounds like a good start to an idea that seems to work with good meter. Your vocal is too low in the mix for this attempt and TBH you need to practice your breathing technique to reach those higher notes ... you have a great voice and that is an instrument in itself. I would work on this a little more as I feel it has great potential ... I have writers block bad time at the moment and if I was writing this I wouldn't think it was rubbish ..Good luck with it

Hi got the feeling this is kinda better than the original, I'm saying that because years later you have IMO created a better mix .. well done and NO crits! ( Not my era but I love the lyrics as they fit so well with the beat) Steve (SRM)

The VERY best vocal work on this song ... One of my absolute favs ... so many singers loose the feeling of this song .. great post !! ( I think Roy would love this .. KD Lang sang this years ago and I actually cried .. but this ... wow ! ) Great post Steve ( SRM )

Great vocal for this genre ... me like Steve

Awful mix .. the vocal needs more presents and the back beat ( showing my age now ) needs a revamp on the bass and high end frequencies Good song though and worth the time ? Steve

Sorry to be a pain ( and I have a doggy right channel (ear)) but it does need a bit more separation on the backing ( stereo ) ... not the guitar track just the meat and veg on backing track Steve

You couldn't do it so well without that Neumann U87 .. Nice groove ... and mix Steve

Where's the wonderful vids you do ?

Very atmospheric ... lovely song Steve(SRM)