Andrew, Thanks for the thoughtful comments. They are kind of discordant, but I like brouwer's harmonic vocabulary, esp on guitar. His music is really popular with audiences. I think I'm going to try #3 with woodwinds.
This is another guitar piece but this time written by leo brouwer. It's from a set of beginner etudes that are really amazing and entertaining. I always heard brass, not sure why. It's hard to get good dynamics out of brass samples. This is another experiment.
https://davidsprouse.bandcamp.com/track/etude-simples-2-brouwer
Had flashbacks to a boat trip I took from Sarasota to Key West. Btw worth doing if you're ever down there. They were playing this kind of music. Who's cool cat joe?
optimistic message. I love your style of composition where the words create the overall form (rather than vice versa). It reminds me of stage music, music for drama.
unique assemblage of sounds at the beginning...the tempo changes do sound disconcerting at some points, but if this were at a club...the dancers would like the breaks. Nice one!
Didn't sleep last night so looked here and was able to listen to your song as the sun came up.. It's a beaut here in PDX. Really cold though. Good one!
Paul, Amiller and Douglas thanks for the comments. I did make it a little longer. Not sure why I get obsessed over these little ditties. I heard Bapu is the same with little ditties.
Nice chord progression, haven't heard that before. The words are very au courant viz me as I spend a lot of sleepless nights lately. The way the song builds in its orchestration is very professional; I'll bet I could learn alot about songwriting from you.