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Paul Bush

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  1. Well thanks for all your comments , I put quite a few hour`s in and well added new vocals , bridge etc never imagined i´d get such a positive response to this one as i binned it almost as fast as i wrote it .... so thanks for the support.... Suburban Susan by paul bush She goes on every demonstration not just for the cause, it beats being alone, she straps herself to the mast, to hide her dubious past, While your new friends are stuck to the road … Well you’ve been telling lies about your family ties you don’t come from a broken home, Well she`s you’re a semi detached Aristocrat, dressing down for her gig on the road chorus Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar, untill the ugly girls red In the face , Well you can all lock all your arms, outside those factory farms. saving the human race. Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar, And strap yourselves onto the fence, well wave your banners high, next to the guy who reeks of pertuly oil and incense Well the kids left home now your all alone, And your man´s got much better things to do well you’ve re-read all your books , and now your fading looks are staring in the mirror at you .. If there’s just a slim chance, a whiff of romance, When loneliness gets to you, Well just fantasy, but it might just be the right thing to pull you on through, chorus Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar, and the pudgy girl still getting no breaks Well she´s coloured her hair , more times than cher And screamed slogan’s till she`s blue in the face Bridge She`s never been noticed for being a woman, first time she`s felt part of the ``in´´crowd, now she cries out loud.. …..solo…... Chorus Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar, And miss piggy is still up for grabs and all the feminists smiled with their adopted child And the vegans have eat all of the cake Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar In the hope of being on t.v Well they marched just a mile, with their self-righteous smiles Blowing whistles and tambourines Well they can Sing ***** by jaaa on an old guitar, We´ll meet up back at the bar Switch on the BBC is it you is it me? Just like daytime tv star
  2. Thanks Bjorn , I never know if the songs i write are good or not , I try and do something different sometimes it works sometimes not and i think ``Flint´´ was one of those where the message was more dominant than the song so i think i was pleased with that one......... doesnt happen very often cheers
  3. Great vocals , and i love the harmonies right up my street this one well worth completing
  4. Oh well! at first i thought ??? but i slowly fell in love with this song so much in there, bloody lots of everything, very very clever musicaly brilliant well bloody done I´m jealous cheers
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    2 LIVE 4

    Sorry to hear of your loss ..you must be devastated , our baby cat died 2 months ago our hearts are still breaking , wish you well
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    2 LIVE 4

    Hi whoisp , yes its well worth a bash loved the piano chord changes , run with it ; i wrote a song in the summer (2-3 days) I thought it wasnt up to much , went back to it last week and re-worked it , and Ive almost re recorded it all once again and it now sounds fine so one can never tel,l but that what you have so far sounded more than fine well worth staying with cheers P
  7. Great production I´m envious of the sublime guitar playing , well the whole thing really
  8. Great guitar tones and of course playing just really great stuff
  9. Hi supareells cheers , well yes the ending is just me being silly It wont be on the final song , I thought it would cheer us all up after all the bad news going about . another one of those songs that slowly evolved 4 chords and some cheeky text thanks for commenting cheers P
  10. Hi chaps , I wrote this one back in the summer where in the UK demonstrator`s were glueing themselve to Tarmac, Trains, and other objects to save us all , Its a work in progress ..so all comments are welcome , Its a song about a housewife who goes on demonstrations to pep up her life( lovelife) to meet like minded people to hold hands and sing in harmony and in the process to save us all , and at the end of the day if she gets a ................ well then thats a bonus then its back home to surburbia and wait for the BBC news ..cheers
  11. Hi chaps , well i took onboard all the good tips and comments so thanks for all your input ,Its been renamed ``the only one´´ with a new cover to reflect the new and last mixdown , Ive left in one or two vocal idiosyncracies to keep it live and not midified (that rhymes) any comments would be welcomed cheers P
  12. I´m not a technical guy at all so i leave all that type of stuff to the others but I really like the riffs ,chord changes and the overall mood of the song I´m not sure where you want to go with this if your adding vocals or not but its pleasing and could be a backdrop for a film, tv thing, an Irish scene old town with windswept bogs ..I´m going on a bit but you get the gist
  13. I had a portastudio way back when really helped me with my songwriting shame i didnt have one earlyer when i didnt have anyone to play off great song bye the bye cheers
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    Reverb

    Another great one Barry loved the guitar tone as usual cheers
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    Franny

    Hi David just had another listen to make sure i was right the first time i commented ..... Yep...just a briliant piece of music thanks for sharing
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    Franny

    Hi David I´m sure I,ve mentioned this before but your compositions always remind me of a couple of british film director`s Mike leigh,Ken loach , on some of their fantasic british social documentary films , way back when..... great stuff
  17. I concure with all the above ..and just great vocals ...super song
  18. Yeah that was super , great video , well done
  19. Yeah ripped my soul out this one ..just seeing a london cab in the first few frames was enough to set the mood have`nt been back for so long... way too long cheers great track P
  20. HI Mr wookie , every song you make i reach for my best headphones ( not the pink ones) sit back a let it take me on a journey . great track loved the guitar tones .. and lots of surprises cheers P
  21. Yeah i believe every word as lynn says ,the vocals are stunning great job cheers P
  22. I´m more of a song guy than a production type of chap so i felt somewhat qualified to add my pennethworth ,vocals are really great and the harmonies fit really well seems a simple song but I lknow there´s a lot of hard work gone into that congratulations , excelent song very difficult pull off and you did it well cheers P
  23. Thanks noynekker , Ive taken my time with this one , I`ve swopped out that bass drum and intro bass guitar Ive brought the piano`s up in the mix and generally mopped up bits `n´ pieces ready to do a more smoother mixdown... I put that (grimsby docks) tune on the backburner , ready for a later date to be worked on it needs a fresh approach anyways thanks for your comments always welcome cheers paul
  24. Hi Chaps , here´s a new song pre mixdown , just to put it out there for some tips, comments etc ..i´m not happy with the guitar solo but a i said its a song in progress see what you all think cheers
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