Paul Bush

Thanks Larry , this one took on a life of its own so i didnt try and write to the normal verse, chorus , verse etc i just let it take its course and let it ramble on, I didnt want to make a typical 3:30 pop tune this time ..I endulged myself on this one cheers P

Hi Bjorn , this is not my thing really ..but then I couldnt stop listening ,totally captivating , totally sucked me in .. I´m still hanging by a thread as I write........the 5 minutes flew by  wow  ! this was really something special cheers P

Hi guys I couldnt stand that last mix so Ive re sung some parts, calmed down the reverb cymbals , and struck the compressor  off so here  goes  

Hi Freddy , thanks for taking the time  Ive deleted the song from soundcloud and re posted it again with a new re mix  cheers P

Hi chaps thanks for  all the constuctive comments , Ive re visited the master and realised that  the compressor (thanks Antler) was way over the top and clouded the whole mix , I´ve been watching way too many tutorials and over complicated the whole mixdown stage  and not trusting my own ears , so i´m re-doing some vocals with a tick  less reverb and I´ll  post again at some stage , oh and the cymbals have been calmed down in places ..once again thanks for all the constructive advice..P

hi chaps , well after a few hours of messin around in the studio I managed to get it this far, I  made quite a few changes and thanks to all the helpful comments you all pushed and inspired me to once again to better myself and dig deeper for this recording so thanks and as always your comments are more than welcomed cheers p

52 minutes ago, DeeringAmps said:

I'll echo all of the above.

t

What's your overall level on the mix, seems a bit light, had to turn it up quite a bit...
Not that that's a bad thing...

Yeah Hi t , Ive left myself a bit of headroom on this one before I master, this is the first time I`ve managed to do this as usually I push it all to the max leaving nowhere to go later on so i´m really experimenting with this one , the drums are all seperate, and many tracks  are using  lots of busses giving me easyer  control at the mix stage ....well thats the idea anyway ..or failing that I`ll just have a few beers and push record ......cheers P

Hi chaps well this ones been on the back burner for some time , so I made some (many)changes and heres what came out , itS  another  rant about , politics and media etc all comments are welcome cheers P.. .......the end will faded out at some stage....

Hi this one flew under the radar , another good song  from you,  really liked the percussion ,  cant fault it in any way  good stuff cheers P

Oh yes Liked this very much great melody , wasnt too keen on the fill guitar percussion did the trick  , great vocals top song ...

Hi Tim, yes there are certanly a few  phrases that woukld work better if the played the same melody  lots in there to choose from lots of potential

Great acoustic guitar tone , i never achieve that , it all pops out at you , yeah i liked this very nuch cheers

Hi whoisp Yes it just got better and better as the song continued,  really kept the listener interested , like a good cold beer right to the very last drop , really liked the vocals , yep great stuff this one  cheers

sounded fun to me loved all the instuments ,

Hi Allan I Just love your meandering melodies , and thats the hard part there´s always a surprise in store...... nice one 

I´m always jealous of these bloody clear sounding recordings mine in comparison are all muddy and muddled ..a bit like my brain ....good song

I hate to sound boring but Its just another great track , always faultless playing and production  ..now can you please post a crap song with bad timming and offkey vocals so that at least i can look myself in the mirror and feel a bit better in myself  another great track cheers yours enviously P

Yeah great song and well sung , and the background voices really added that something extra ..cheers p

Hi Tim , well this one stretched my musical mind a few times which is always a good thing so i had to go back a few times to re listsen...... nice one  cheers P

Gary just soo beauitful your voice was absolutely perfect and the live recording  faultless and thats very difficult to pull off ,once again thanks for posting just great .....

Yes Bjorn , lovely composition really clear and crisp recording ( if thats the technical jargon) cheers i liked it very much .

Not much of an ambiant man myself but I listened to the end and was chilled out,  pleasant trip super sounds , 

Hi this was lovely , i have a real problem with recording acoustic guitars , but you seem to have nailed it great sound nice composition .

Hi Chaps thanks for all your comments , considering I wasnt going to persue this song any further it  was only due to all the super response and encouragement  from you guys that I started again almost from scratch  and brought it thus far it seems i get to a point that i play the song and record  the so many times over that i get ``rose tinted glasses´´ on the brain where i just cant see/hear the Wonky bits anymore (the strings bridge  timing is out) ...so i´ll, as Mark rightly states i I should invest in some ..additional time consuming , boring  , tedious timing editing, once again thanks you for being so generous in your compliments and comments .....as my teacher used to say  ....good but can do better cheers P

Hi Doug, I really liked the guitar tone and the harmonies did the trick