Hi Donny. Solid song and performances.
Everything is clean and clear in the mix however the piano is drowning the vocal. It sounds to me that you're not confident in the vocal but you have a really nice voice - bring it forward.
Good stuff.
All excellent except I found the synth that you used for the arpeggio very irritating. There is too much reverb on it and the actual synth tone you have used fills too much of the mix. Just my 2 pennies.
Hi Douglas
I hope you are well. I think I remember hearing another of yours (and I still like the album title)
Great song but I think the mix needs some work - you can barely hear the drums in places. I also agree the intro is too long.
Sorry Tim I was a bit vague there. I wasn't keen on the lead synth sound and I would have preferred to hear a acoustic traditional instrument (mandolin for example) with the synth backing. I think the mix of the two would be nice. Only my humble opinion mate. You know I lurves ya