DO NOT GIVE UP JOHN.
You have talent mate. As Lynn said above, arrange your vocal melody/song according to your vocal capabilities or get someone else to sing your songs if you don't like the sound of your own voice. I know I always make sure the key is right for me and use liberal amounts of Melodyne.
Thanks, and thank you very much for listening to Tangle. I'll pass your comments on to Scott, my youngest (He was 30 in March, BTW)
So, you were 10 when he was born?
great topic - excellent lyrics and performed very well.
The snare is a bit thin for my taste - I don't think the mix is toppy as such, I found myself focusing on the snare...