ABull 89 Posted November 21, 2019 (edited) A Edited December 18, 2019 by ABull 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 544 Posted November 21, 2019 Cool song - the arrangement works well. I thought the BGVs stood out as a good part of this song. I liked your lead vocal - Chris Isaac came to mind for me - not the same, but it made me think of him. The mix overall sounded good to me - thanks for posting. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 862 Posted November 22, 2019 The harmony parts are indeed very good. Liked the way you brought it in on the second line of the second verse. For me, and I don’t know why, The Association came to mind. Blast from the past, eh? Well developed story line, good piece of songwriting, nicely done overall. Tom 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Makke 97 Posted November 22, 2019 Nice song. I liked the melodic tune and arrangement. Good vocals and sounds. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kakku 102 Posted November 22, 2019 Very good, likeable song 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Johnbee58 229 Posted November 23, 2019 Great tune. The vocals are top notch. 🙂John B 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
freddy j 380 Posted November 23, 2019 This took me back to that early 1960's style. This number has a great melodic feel and you vocals are excellent and really bring out the sentiments of the lyrics. Excellent stuff Allan....1 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
amiller 186 Posted November 25, 2019 Actually, the first thing I thought of was The Beach Boys. Very nice.😊 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 89 Posted November 26, 2019 On 11/21/2019 at 3:31 PM, Douglas Kirby said: Cool song - the arrangement works well. I thought the BGVs stood out as a good part of this song. I liked your lead vocal - Chris Isaac came to mind for me - not the same, but it made me think of him. The mix overall sounded good to me - thanks for posting. Hey Douglas, thanks for the kind comments mate -- I'm glad you like my demo.~~Allan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 89 Posted November 28, 2019 On 11/22/2019 at 12:53 AM, DeeringAmps said: The harmony parts are indeed very good. Liked the way you brought it in on the second line of the second verse. For me, and I don’t know why, The Association came to mind. Blast from the past, eh? Well developed story line, good piece of songwriting, nicely done overall. Tom Hey Tom, I'm pleased that the song resonated with you--thanks for your comments~~Allan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 89 Posted November 29, 2019 On 11/22/2019 at 9:50 AM, macce said: Nice song. I liked the melodic tune and arrangement. Good vocals and sounds. Hey macce, thanks for listening & commenting -- much appreciated~~Allan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 89 Posted December 4, 2019 On 11/24/2019 at 7:56 PM, amiller said: Actually, the first thing I thought of was The Beach Boys. Very nice.😊 Thank you, mate. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
congalocke 28 Posted December 8, 2019 Nice job. I liked the melody going from verse to chorus as it catches me as well as the Styx-ish keyboard playing at 1:53-ish... 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kennywtelejazz 1,073 Posted December 8, 2019 Hi Allan , This song sounds professional in all the areas where it counts. Well written , nice mix, good playing I liked your vocals and vocal delivery a lot ...Good sound , phrasing and dynamics .. all the best , Kenny 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
