RexRed Posted October 15, 2023 Share Posted October 15, 2023 Yet another song awesome Cakewalk peeps! Still a work in progress. Needs some kind of blues guitar solo in the middle. Suggestions welcome. 💗💝💖 Thanks for listening! RR 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted October 25, 2023 Share Posted October 25, 2023 beautiful,leave as is.add some percussion in spots shaker etc.jack c 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JEFF MCDONALD Posted October 28, 2023 Share Posted October 28, 2023 Some seriously beautiful music and melodies that draw the listener in, great stuff, enjoyed it all! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted October 29, 2023 Share Posted October 29, 2023 (edited) Shaker would be great. The BGV ooooh's cut off, leaving a beat at the end of the measure uncovered, to me it seems a bit of a dropoff. Your lead vocal (love your voice, and the airy wash of reverb that sits it perfectly) is mixed a bit hot for my taste in this mix. How about this - reminded me of Marvin Gaye. Can't get much more of a compliment than that. Excellent! cheers, -Tom Edited October 29, 2023 by PhonoBrainer 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PavlovsCat Posted November 2, 2023 Share Posted November 2, 2023 Serious talent. Sorry, I enjoy your music too much and can't think of any suggestions beyond, keep it up! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RexRed Posted November 2, 2023 Author Share Posted November 2, 2023 (edited) Many heartfelt thanks for the compliments on my song Cakewalk friends! I am always mixing my vocals too hot, it seems to be a chronic occurrence. And yes, a shaker or two would work well in this tune. The Ooos do drop off perhaps too abruptly. They could have hung on a bit or beat more. There is a tiny chord change in the last beat and I am not sure the chord of my Ooos worked with that chord change. It seems the longer I make music the more overwhelming of a task it becomes. The editing process is never ever ever ever done. 😁 It is like raising children, they get to a certain adult age and fly out of the nest and all you can do at that point is pray things go well for them. All the best to you fine people! Edited November 2, 2023 by RexRed 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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