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I like the bluesy riff in this one Jack. If you want to take this from "demo" to finished work; I think you need some live guitars.
Maybe a "grinding" B3 would be a nice touch.
A little "spit and polish" on the lyrics and I think you have a tune here.

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19 hours ago, DeeringAmps said:

I like the bluesy riff in this one Jack. If you want to take this from "demo" to finished work; I think you need some live guitars.
Maybe a "grinding" B3 would be a nice touch.
A little "spit and polish" on the lyrics and I think you have a tune here.

hey tom:how are ya.thanks for wonderful comments.jack c

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I like it, kind of reminds me of The Doors. But when you go after William Shatner, you're walking on the fighting side of me👊🏼

Just kidding. LLAP🖖🏼

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