thegaltieribrothers 226 Posted April 3 (edited) OK pop pickers here's the latest tune from the Galtieri Brothers, let her go, have a listen, make a comment if you like + share the CbB love. best wishes! paul Edited April 3 by thegaltieribrothers add Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 713 Posted April 3 beautiful song.some voice notes are out of tune.where drums stop add some percussion.jack c. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 1,792 Posted April 3 Maybe Jack's right, add percussion on the verse after coming out of the first chorus. The "radio friendly" mix; I'd pull the first run thru of the second chorus. You did some changes to the harmonies there, nice touch. 3 minute rocker here so take any suggestions with a grain of salt. Overall, 👍's t 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David Sprouse 801 Posted April 3 Nice song, paul. You have a very infectious style (esp the rhythm). 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jesse Screed 652 Posted April 3 Great story, is it about someone you know. If you let her go, she might very well return. Like the bass and the backing vox. I like it all really. well crafted and I can tell you put a lot of work into this. kudos! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 226 Posted April 5 Hi jack c, Glad you noticed my intentional out of tune notes to give it a more country feel 😉 I left the rhythm arrangement spartan so that the guitar part could ring out clearly but I'll have another listen. Thank you for taking the time to listen and comment. Hi Tom, Thanks for listening and commenting + your suggestions for a better 3 minute pop mix, it is really appreciated. Hi Bapu, Glad you liked the song + thanks for listening and commenting it means a lot. best wishes paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Makke 300 Posted April 5 Enjoyable melodic POP music. I liked the vocs and arrangement. Good mix and sounds. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larry T. 250 Posted April 5 Hi paul, very nice song....you have a very good conception (feel, flavor, instrumentation, tempo) of the piece already so it's now just a matter of taste and exactly how you want to see it realized...to my ears there isn't much to change....i would shorten it to around 3:40 and maybe add some piano and a few electric guitar touches 👍👌🎶🎵 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
freddy j 621 Posted April 5 Another really nice song Paul. I love the "uncluttered" sound of this song. It all fits together very well. Excellent work!! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 226 Posted April 7 Hi David, Glad you liked the song, thanks for listening. Hi Jesse, She might very well return ... in another song. Thank you both for listening and commenting, it means a lot. Best wishes paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 128 Posted April 8 Hey Paul, this is a terrific demo of your song -- nice arrangement with good vocals and sweet acoustic guitars -- (wish I could get acoustics to sound that good -- one of the major banes of my recording existence!) Allan. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bajan Blue 1,098 Posted April 9 Really nice track and I love those harmonies - they sound really great Cool track Nigel 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
noynekker 379 Posted April 9 Well done ! . . . well recorded (and performed), the lead vocal has a very close up sound, really enjoyed it. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bjornpdx 1,031 Posted April 9 Paul, that strumming chord progression at the beginning sounds like something from America (the band) I like your pop styling and story telling lyrics. Nice job. -Bjorn 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wookiee 1,787 Posted April 11 Sounds OK Paul, has some independent vocal characteristics, which is cool, I mean at least your vocal does not kill at a parsec or two like mine 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AndyB01 379 Posted April 11 Hmm very nice, I like the stripped back nature of it so not sure I'd be looking to add a lot more to this. Great job. Andy 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 226 Posted April 19 Hi Makke, Glad you liked the Pop sound thanks for listening. Hi Larry T, Thanks for your suggestions about extra guitars and piano + thanks for listening. Hi freddy j, Thank you for your kind comments. Thank you all for listening and commenting, it means a lot. best wishes paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
