Douglas Kirby 785 Posted March 26 Good job Jack - this was quite unique. The synths were an interesting listen. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bajan Blue 1,037 Posted March 26 HI Jack I really liked this and I have to say a really good mix The only thing I would say and this is a personal preference, so please feel free to ignore!! I found the bridge starting 2.29 a bit too long at 30 seconds or so Otherwise loved it Cool Nigel Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 709 Posted March 26 1 hour ago, Douglas Kirby said: Good job Jack 1 hour ago, Bajan Blue said: I really liked this and I have to say a really good mix thanks mates for listen comments!!!!!!!!jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
steve@baselines.com 273 Posted March 27 Love when that slidy reverby guitar comes in - and the bass tone along with it. Good vox too. Steve Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 709 Posted March 27 2 hours ago, steve@baselines.com said: Love when that slidy reverby guitar comes in - and the bass tone along with it. Good vox too. Steve thank you steve.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David Sprouse 795 Posted March 28 ecletic mix. positive message. I heard some jazz chords in there! What synth are you using for spacey stuff? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 709 Posted March 28 13 hours ago, David Sprouse said: I heard some jazz chords in there! What synth are you using for spacey stuff? i'am the chord man!!!!!!!!!!!i'll look up synths.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 1,726 Posted March 29 On 3/26/2022 at 6:29 AM, Bajan Blue said: found the bridge a bit too long At almost 5 minutes, I think there is some "fat" in the whole tune that could be trimmed. Also, I'd put the keys and guitar on a buss, and use some side chain compression off the vocal track. That would keep it "below" the vocal, but give a little more "impact" in between the vocal lines. just a suggestion... t Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larry T. 234 Posted March 29 (edited) wow....you are on a real creative roll jack....i never did get back to finish listening to your last song, so let me put some time into this one....it's a real tour de force of composition and playing....the production and mix sound is very good....the EQ/audio of the synth's is outstanding as is your playing/programming of them....the ending is really cool....this is another one of my favorites of yours along with My Special Place, selim and sivad 👍👍👍👍🎶🎶🎶🎶 edit: i have to say that your composing in the last few months is miles above anything i can do at this time....thanks for the inspiration and education....cheers!!!! Edited March 29 by Larry T. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wookiee 1,737 Posted March 29 I like the squelchy Bass but I am with Tom need to trim some of the fat as I found my furry mind wondering off and not really listening. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 709 Posted March 29 11 hours ago, DeeringAmps said: At almost 5 minutes, I think there is some "fat" thank you tom.jack c. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 709 Posted March 29 9 hours ago, Larry T. said: is miles above anything i can do at this time....thanks for the inspiration and education....cheers!!!! larry thanks for thoughts!!!!!!!!!when i listen to yes,gentle giant,genesis i want to give up playing as they are so great.but i keep going same for ya .you do many wonderful things and keep them up as ya go.!!!jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 709 Posted March 29 3 hours ago, Wookiee said: I like the squelchy Bass but I am with Tom need to trim some of the fat as I found my furry mind wondering off and not really listening. thanks for listen.i love long songs.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wookiee 1,737 Posted March 29 42 minutes ago, jack c. said: thanks for listen.i love long songs.jack c. So do I as I was trying to imply this did not keep my attention, unfortunately. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bjornpdx 1,005 Posted March 30 Hey Jack you have a really nice melody going on in there so I don't think you need the beeps and boops. There were a couple of spots where a big delay on the voc would be cool, for example around 1:50. -Bjorn Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
garybrun 874 Posted March 31 Hi Jack. You have come on a long way since you first started posting your mixes. Not as hot and good dynamic range.,, your getting better all the time. Gary 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 709 Posted March 31 21 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Hey Jack you have a really nice melody going thanks mate.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 709 Posted March 31 13 hours ago, garybrun said: your getting better all the time. boy this is so wonderful for me to hear.jack c. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 226 Posted April 4 Hi Jack, Love the synths + love the message of the song. It is very well mixed + has a nice counterpoint of styles. Thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
