garybrun 877 Posted February 16 jack I have got to say your have really improved on your productions. When you first started posting a while ago everything was too hot and distorted. well done. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 713 Posted February 16 10 minutes ago, garybrun said: jack I have got to say your have really improved on your productions. When you first started posting a while ago everything was too hot and distorted. well done. thanks mate:me ears weren't trained to such stuff.tom deering and mark skinner gave me endless help.me forever thanks go out to both.jack c. 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PavlovsCat 1,738 Posted February 17 Wow, this is very creative and original. It's really interesting and off the beaten path -- and I mean that in the most positive sense. Your musical imagination is really impressive, for example when you did the keyboard solo section, I started thinking about Zappa from the Tinsel Town Rebellion album. Your vocals and musical voicings really capture my attention. I really enjoyed this. It is a musical treat. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bajan Blue 1,088 Posted February 17 Hi Jack i like this - and I agree with Pavlov - reminiscent of some Zappa!! Mix sounds good here too. cool Nigel 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 713 Posted February 17 7 hours ago, PavlovsCat said: Your vocals and musical voicings really capture my attention. I really enjoyed this. It is a musical treat. 2 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: i like this - and I agree with Pavlov - reminiscent of some Zappa!! thanks mates.used to play a number of franks stuff years ago.jack c. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 791 Posted February 19 Nice work Jack - I liked the synths in this one - and your mixes continue to improve. I liked the lyrics as well. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cactus Music 1,551 Posted February 19 This sounds overall real good to me. Only criticism ,if you don’t mind, is both the beginning and end. The beginning sounds like something got chopped off before the first note. The end the bass is leaking after the last note. And the riff is not interesting enough to have it repeat that many times. Either shorten it or add some ear candy. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 713 Posted February 19 6 hours ago, John Vere said: Only criticism ,if you don’t mind, is both the beginning and end. i think soundcloud does this.thanks.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 713 Posted February 19 8 hours ago, Douglas Kirby said: Nice work Jack - I liked the synths in this one - and your mixes continue to improve. I liked the lyrics as well. thanks mate.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cactus Music 1,551 Posted February 20 3 hours ago, jack c. said: i think soundcloud does this.thanks.jack c. No they don't chop beginnings, but Cakewalks export can. I just ran into this yesterday so I had to re export and give it a bit more space, The real start of the song was at 3:00 so I set for 2:04 but I had to use 2:01 or it chopped it off, just like yours did. This is why I always use a Wave editor to top and tail, but I was just posting to Sound Cloud so I could proof my mixes on my phone etc. The Bass ending part you can fix by slip editing the end of the bass track. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David Sprouse 801 Posted February 20 the echo suits your voice well. I liked the primary motif. very addictive. could have ended at 3'55" or so though. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Old Joad 1,547 Posted February 20 Great Job, lots of very cool bits🍻 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mark skinner 669 Posted February 20 I Loved this one Jack. The change at 1:45 was brilliant! A Lot of Great sounds in this. Highly impressed with the mix as well. Nice ending . mark Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kevin Walsh 217 Posted February 20 Great mix! Everything sounds pretty great and your vocals are a really good fit for this piece. +1 on the Zappa reference. Great instrumental bridge, very cool moves there, and the ending was very cool. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 713 Posted February 20 15 hours ago, John Vere said: No they don't chop beginnings in the pass they have cut off me song start.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 713 Posted February 20 15 hours ago, David Sprouse said: the echo suits your voice well. I liked the primary motif. very addictive. could have ended at 3'55" or so though. 13 hours ago, Old Joad said: Great Job, lots of very cool bits 2 hours ago, mark skinner said: I Loved this one Jack. The change at 1:45 was brilliant! A Lot of Great sounds in this. Highly impressed with the mix as well. Nice ending . 1 hour ago, Kevin Walsh said: Great mix! Everything sounds pretty great and your vocals are a really good fit for this piece. +1 on the Zappa reference. Great instrumental bridge, very cool moves there, and the ending was very cool. i hope i don't get big headed with all these outstanding complaints.thanks sooooooooooo.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KSband 326 Posted February 20 I like the groove, very reminiscent of the Talking Heads to me. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 713 Posted February 20 4 hours ago, KurtS said: I like the groove, very reminiscent of the Talking Heads to me. i hear many times talking heads although 1 of me favorite bands i don't try to sound like them.jack c. thanks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
noynekker 378 Posted February 21 hey jack c. , me thinks this is great piece, enjoyed a lot, agreed maybe fade earlier, you got the mixing thing going on now . . . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
