mark skinner 632 Posted January 26 Some Really cool changes in this one Jack. One of the repeating changes really sounds like a Bowie move. I think a few spots could use some vocal volume automation , but nothing drastic or a deal breaker. I Really liked the song and the instrumentation. The mix sounded nice as well. Enjoyed it .. mark Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
steve@baselines.com 265 Posted January 26 Original ideas Jack. Good work here. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 1,660 Posted January 27 I think we can still work on getting a bit more "commercial" level Jack. But the good news; the mix is "clean", the listener can "turn it up". Very personal story line, well done! t Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Makke 300 Posted January 27 Good composition and arrangement. Well done. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 770 Posted January 27 It is quite a clean mix and I enjoyed the listen - nicely done. Interesting song. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 682 Posted January 27 15 hours ago, mark skinner said: Some Really cool changes in this one Jack. 14 hours ago, steve@baselines.com said: Original ideas Jack 12 hours ago, DeeringAmps said: Very personal story line, well done! 3 hours ago, Makke said: Good composition and arrangement. 51 minutes ago, Douglas Kirby said: It is quite a clean mix and I enjoyed the listen - nicely done. thank you all.jack c. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
STEVE POOLE 226 Posted January 27 This song brings me to mind of a Lennon message, one has to listen to it several times to see what it's meaning is. To me and my idea of a great mix is that you really need to see this as a painting, try to single out your message (Vocals) as red, and adjust the blue's and green's as your backing .. and I know that sound like wakkibacji stuff but it's not .. you need to take a step back and see what you want the listener to feel ... anyway I think it's a very good concept .. but needs work. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larry T. 221 Posted January 27 Aother good one....i like the sound of the mix on this 👍👌🎶🔊 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 682 Posted January 27 4 hours ago, SupaReels said: This song brings me to mind of a Lennon message, one has to listen to it several times to see what it's meaning is. To me and my idea of a great mix is that you really need to see this as a painting, try to single out your message (Vocals) as red, and adjust the blue's and green's as your backing .. and I know that sound like wakkibacji stuff but it's not please explain this in another way/words.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 682 Posted January 27 3 hours ago, Larry T. said: Aother good one....i like the sound of the mix on this thank you larry.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
