Jesse Screed 624 Posted September 21, 2021 (edited) let me know what needs to be improved https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14315293 Edited September 22, 2021 by Jesse Screed 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miguel Carzola 33 Posted September 22, 2021 Not a thing. It’s perfect as is 😊 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jesse Screed 624 Posted September 22, 2021 7 hours ago, Miguel Carzola said: Not a thing. It’s perfect as is 😊 everything is perfection miguel Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
freddy j 596 Posted September 23, 2021 Perfect indeed. Luv the intro and the interesting chord sections. The volume on the vocal was spot on. Cool stuff pal. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 1,726 Posted September 24, 2021 Not a participant? by choice or necessity? t 👍’s 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mark skinner 646 Posted September 25, 2021 Very cool song Jesse ! Loved all the instrumentation. I did think the real dry vocal sections could use a tiny bit of room verb. Enjoyed it .. mark 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David Sprouse 795 Posted September 26, 2021 (edited) Even tiny details like that flitty synclavierish sound are perfect. Everything's perfect, jesse. Edited September 26, 2021 by David Sprouse 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 709 Posted September 26, 2021 your stuff is so complicated unlike other stuff i know.except for beef (i won't say it).bring up bass.jack c. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PhonoBrainer 1,817 Posted September 26, 2021 So many curious and wonderful things. Love the early Talking Heads vibe. Enjoyed vocals with the reverb coming on and off. I wonder if you could have fun with some varied panning of the vocals? I listened in headphones, the vocals sound great in the mix as is, but for a song like this you could have one line coming in panned left, next line panned right, moving things around like that. Just an idea, and you don't appear to have any shortage of those as is. cheers, -Tom 1 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Old Joad 1,426 Posted September 26, 2021 Eat more 🍗 dude😎 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites