Lynn Wilson 496 Posted February 21 Jack, you have such a unique approach to songwriting that makes it interesting to listen to even if the mix is a little off. In this case, my only crit is that the lead vocal could be louder so that the words can be understood better. Overall, your voice is well recorded and clear, just not quite loud enough for my old ears. You write interesting songs, and I can hear the time and thought that goes into each one, so let those lyrics shine! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 180 Posted February 22 7 hours ago, Lynn Wilson said: jack, you have such a unique approach to songwriting that makes it interesting to listen to even if the mix is a little off. In this case, my only crit is that the lead vocal could be louder so that the words can be understood better. Overall, your voice is well recorded and clear, just not quite loud enough for my old ears. You write interesting songs, and I can hear the time and thought that goes into each one, so let those lyrics shine! thanks for the wonderful review!!!!!! the mix is a little off. please explain this further or in different words.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lynn Wilson 496 Posted February 22 Just what I said about turning the vocal up. All else is clear and well panned. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 180 Posted February 22 10 hours ago, Lynn Wilson said: Just what I said about turning the vocal up. All else is clear and well panned. thanks.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Makke 134 Posted February 26 Beautiful song. Pleasant soundscape and ambiance. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 180 Posted February 26 40 minutes ago, Makke said: Beautiful song. Pleasant soundscape and ambiance. thanks mate.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bajan Blue 546 Posted February 28 Jack I agree with Lynn re the vocal but i would also turn the accordion sound down a bit - seems a bit over overpowering apart from that good track Nigel Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 180 Posted February 28 3 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: I agree with Lynn re the vocal but i would also turn the accordion sound down a bit - seems a bit over overpowering apart from that good track thanks mate.jack c. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 902 Posted March 7 Hey Jack, I'd bring the bass to the center (its a taste thing; your tune, your production). I'm thinking I would use a bit of verb on the accordion. The "stabs" would blend a bit better that way; I think. Is this a re-mix, I followed the vocal, up a db or so wouldn't hurt, but... t Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jack c. 180 Posted March 7 14 minutes ago, DeeringAmps said: Hey Jack, I'd bring the bass to the center (its a taste thing; your tune, your production). I'm thinking I would use a bit of verb on the accordion. The "stabs" would blend a bit better that way; I think. Is this a re-mix, I followed the vocal, up a db or so wouldn't hurt, but... t Is this a re-mix, no.thanks for listen/comments.jack c. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hatstand 224 Posted March 8 Invoking the spirit of Vivian Stanshall 👍 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
