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Oh those girls just love cosmetics .....Re-mix bottom of the page .

 

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Listening to the opening bars the drums seem a little awash in reverb, which as the song progresses shows it self in the toms booming/hanging a little, perhaps that was your intent.  Overall the drums do end up sounding in a different space to my furry ears, which is  shame as it is quite a well craft song with some nice licks on the guitar, nice touch with the B3.

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tighten up drums,bass,guitar and check some your voice notes as they are a tad off.nice job recording and sounds.good song.jack c.

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Wow, I really like this song!  Your vocal is very strong and convincing and well performed.  This has a retro vibe, yet a modern sound.  A little less reverb would make this sound closer to the listener and more intimate, but I like reverb, so it belongs regardless.  Good songwriting!

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39 minutes ago, Lynn Wilson said:

Wow, I really like this song!  Your vocal is very strong and convincing and well performed.  This has a retro vibe, yet a modern sound.  A little less reverb would make this sound closer to the listener and more intimate, but I like reverb, so it belongs regardless.  Good songwriting!

Hi Lynn ,  and thanks for those encouraging comments ...now I´m really confused !!!  , totally agree with you all on the over the top reverb so Ive calmed it down  and re-mixed  Ived re recorded the  bass in parts and I´m now rewriting and  recording some of the vocals ... I´m shocked and suprised by some of the response to this one as I was going to delete  and bin it convinced it was a pile of  ..doggy doo doo .....and said so much  on another forum so it really does go to show that I know absolutely nothing about the stuff I do.....  cheers ...still confused

 

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On 2/21/2021 at 11:57 AM, Paul Bush said:

I was going to delete  and bin it

Don't do that!
Verb on the drums, that's a taste thing; who cares.

Ringo kept the time, I think John pushed the tunes; at least that's what I hear.

Your tune; I feel the drummer needs to "push" the tune, I'd start with the snare maybe.
Just a "tad" in front of the beat some times; I think...

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Great guitar work! This to me sounds like a song that should be driven Hard with the bass and drums. It's very funky. When the timing issues are resolved , I'd grab the faders/pan knobs and just start over on the mix. I believe this song could be Stellar.   mark

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Things sound out of sync to me. That said, really good vocals and superb guitar playing/sound. Wish I could get the guitar on my stuff sound like that. Get it all in sync and you've cracked it :)

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O.K chaps Ive re- recorded some of those vocals , I`ve punched in some new Bass, tamed down the reverb, changed the snare , and adressed some of the timing issues ..and I`ve washed the car ..without all of your constuctive input and concern this song wouldnt have got this far, so thanks  for taking the time out to comment ,it really does mean a lot  ..so here is the re -mix cheers.......  its not perfect but then again  things  never are.

 

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Paul This is a very good song. What really makes it for me is your voice which is just right for this genre.
So just sitting here as a casual listener, can't say that I noticed timing issues.

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Did you put 2 coats of polish on the car? :)

Nice song and mix Paul. Some lovely guitar work. 

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Wow thanks for the encouraging words chaps , I struggled with this one towards the end ,and I´m so pleased that you all talked me into re.recording and doing another mix    ,  polish? noooo  way too busy cheers 

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