An Urdu Song (Na Tu Aaye Gi)

[Pcode 19]

The idea behind the music was to commune between mellow sounding instruments and angry sounding electric guitars...
let me know what you guys think.... and be gentle LOL :)

https://youtu.be/l2aC9U5TyJ4

 

[garybrun 621]

Hi @Pcode
Nice mix.  Panning and delays are great.
My personal preferance I would take the distorted guitar down a little bit in level and bring up the precussion a little more with sparkle.
I dont know what you are singing about...  is the vocal meant to be back in the mix?

Edited March 20, 2019 by garybrun

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Hi garybrun, thanks for listening and thanks for the feedback...

[emeraldsoul 1,202]

Well this is very listenable. You might pull back on that intro distorted guitar just a hair. Really awesome mix, vocals are awash in a reverb dream, yet very distinct. Killer. I think you have contrasted the smooth stuff and the rough stuff very well.

 

I agree with Gary, there are spots where you could bring up the percussion. Is it the same level throughout the song? Why not punch it, or program in some more fills / variation?  

 

Super vocals. Nice doubling, panning, rvb, delay - they are awesome.

 

You might want to fix the spelling on "subscribe" . . .

 

cheers,

-Tom

Edited March 25, 2019 by emeraldsoul

[bjornpdx 645]

Very nice song. Nobody else mentioned it so maybe it's just me, but I thought the volume was inconsistent. Too soft here and too loud there.
Good job on the vocals. I'm very impressed.

[Pcode 19]

Thanks for listening bjornpdx and thanks for feedback... 

 

[Lynn Wilson 494]

Superb!  I could listen to this all day long, and I probably will.  No crits here.