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I decided to take this one down.  The lyrics didn't work to make the point I was trying to make.

Thanks to people who took the time to comment

 

 

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forgot to add the lyrics
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10 hours ago, bjornpdx said:

I always feel the need to apologize for my singing, but I won't this time but maybe I just did.

Why ? It's the way every song of yours works ... kinda soft and unassuming ... 👍

 

 

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I enjoyed the listen - especially the lyrics - well crafted there.  My only crit is that I wish it had been a bit longer.  Maybe put in a middle eight and then add another verse.

Otherwise - well done.

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What a pleasant melodic piece with some doggone poignant lyrics.  Your vocals were perfect for delivering this message.  Well done Bjorn.

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