kloon 90 Posted September 6, 2020 (edited) New song out today, hope you like it. Quote my number came up today i'm lost in every way and there's so much i need to explain as i slowly go insane will you meet me at the gates i did all i could but all too late and now im starting to lose control will you catch me when i fall my number came up today i'm exile from my happy place and just because i smile doesn't mean im ok i guess I've been waiting for today take me back to my happy place i fade away oh i fade away bring me back to happier days i fade away oh i slowly fade away if i tear down the lies if i open my eyes if i stay on my knees if i break down and cry if i promise you gold if i beg for my life if i fall in line then all will be fine if i tear down the lies if i open my eyes if i stay on my knees if i break down and cry if i promise you gold if i beg for my life if i fall in line then all will be fine if i suffer in pain if i scream out your name if i sell my soul if i live in shame if i fight for you if i fall at your feet will you come for me will you come for me Spotify Link: https://open.spotify.com/album/5hReGw1Mg7fr8GjFnGXQxo?si=raa3E8vESLy2oqGxjJzFlg Edited September 7, 2020 by kloon 4 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
STEVE POOLE 262 Posted September 6, 2020 Ultravox ... re-born ...Excellent work! love the build, but then I am a fan 😎 S 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 791 Posted September 6, 2020 I really liked the build up in the song as well - I especially enjoyed the lyrics - well done. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kloon 90 Posted September 6, 2020 @ Sabby Brown & Douglas Kirby Thank you very much for your kind words and listening! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mark skinner 670 Posted September 6, 2020 Brilliant ! I loved the clean and airy sound of this and the wonderful build up to the ending choruses. The vocals were very polished and top notch. The female backing vox was Perfect. I think you've done a tremendous job on this and I think it would do good on contemporary Christian radio just as it sits now. I Really loved this , Fantastic job .. mark 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
garybrun 877 Posted September 6, 2020 Very nice. Reminds me of my youth with Ultravox 🙂 I thought the vocals where well placed in the mix and mixed well. Good job! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lynn Wilson 643 Posted September 6, 2020 When I think a song ends too soon, you know I'm in love with it. I must listen again! All excellent! 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 126 Posted September 6, 2020 Hey, you've got that 80s thing down solid -- good demo of your song~~Allan. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kloon 90 Posted September 7, 2020 Thank you very much guys, appreciate it alot! ❤️ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wookiee 1,781 Posted September 7, 2020 long time no tune Kloon hope you are well, nice enough piece mix sound OK here. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kloon 90 Posted September 8, 2020 On 9/7/2020 at 4:55 PM, Wookiee said: long time no tune Kloon hope you are well, nice enough piece mix sound OK here. Thank you very much Wookiee! 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bjornpdx 1,031 Posted September 8, 2020 Your song hit the happy button in my brain, just what I needed. The lyrics maybe weren't intended that way but the overall sound just came together to set that mood. Very well done. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kloon 90 Posted September 9, 2020 5 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Your song hit the happy button in my brain, just what I needed. The lyrics maybe weren't intended that way but the overall sound just came together to set that mood. Very well done. Thank you very much bjorn! Alway happy when my songs touch people in any way. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bajan Blue 1,094 Posted September 9, 2020 Really good stuff and a definite Ultravox type vibe - I love all the vocals, they really are excellent. Good open mix as well First Class Nigel 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kloon 90 Posted September 9, 2020 3 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: Really good stuff and a definite Ultravox type vibe - I love all the vocals, they really are excellent. Good open mix as well First Class Nigel Thank you very much for your kind words Nigel. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David Sprouse 801 Posted September 14, 2020 Whatever it is, it's not worth selling your soul! :D:D I was expecting a happy song; But you do write about that desperate feeling very well, musically and lyrically. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kloon 90 Posted September 14, 2020 1 hour ago, David Sprouse said: Whatever it is, it's not worth selling your soul! :D:D I was expecting a happy song; But you do write about that desperate feeling very well, musically and lyrically. Hehe, yeah i guess the title is a tiny bit missleading. Thank you very much for listening and your kind words! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bapu 5,101 Posted September 25, 2020 Nice production and performances. Nice marriage of the lyric and musical mood. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 1,787 Posted September 25, 2020 A little darker than the title, but all good! I'll agree with others on the mix, well done! 👍 t my thanks to Ed, I'm way behind, thought I'd got past the 5th, but obviously not.......... 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kloon 90 Posted September 26, 2020 Thank you very much guys! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
