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New song out today, hope you like it. :)

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my number came up today
i'm lost in every way
and there's so much i need to explain
as i slowly go insane

will you meet me at the gates
i did all i could
but all too late
and now im starting to lose control
will you catch me when i fall

my number came up today
i'm exile from my happy place
and just because i smile doesn't mean im ok
i guess I've been waiting for today

take me back to my happy place   
i fade away
oh i fade away
bring me back to happier days
i fade away
oh i slowly fade away

if i tear down the lies
if i open my eyes
if i stay on my knees
if i break down and cry
if i promise you gold
if i beg for my life
if i fall in line
then all will be fine

if i tear down the lies
if i open my eyes
if i stay on my knees
if i break down and cry
if i promise you gold
if i beg for my life
if i fall in line
then all will be fine
if i suffer in pain
if i scream out your name
if i sell my soul
if i live in shame
if i fight for you
if i fall at your feet
will you come for me
will you come for me

Spotify Link:

https://open.spotify.com/album/5hReGw1Mg7fr8GjFnGXQxo?si=raa3E8vESLy2oqGxjJzFlg

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@ Sabby Brown & Douglas Kirby

Thank you very much for your kind words and listening! :)

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Brilliant ! I loved the clean and airy sound of this and the wonderful build up to the ending choruses. The vocals were very polished and top notch. The female backing vox was Perfect. I think you've done a tremendous job on this and I think it would do good on contemporary Christian radio just as it sits now. I Really loved this , Fantastic job ..   mark

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Very nice.
Reminds me of my youth with Ultravox 🙂
I thought the vocals where well placed in the mix and mixed well.

Good job!

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When I think a song ends too soon, you know I'm in love with it.  I must listen again!  All excellent!

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Hey, you've got that 80s thing down solid -- good demo of your song~~Allan.

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long time no tune Kloon hope you are well, nice enough piece mix sound OK here.

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On 9/7/2020 at 4:55 PM, Wookiee said:

long time no tune Kloon hope you are well, nice enough piece mix sound OK here.

Thank you very much Wookiee! :)

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Your song hit the happy button in my brain, just what I needed.
The lyrics maybe weren't intended that way but the overall sound just came together to set that mood.
Very well done.

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5 hours ago, bjornpdx said:

Your song hit the happy button in my brain, just what I needed.
The lyrics maybe weren't intended that way but the overall sound just came together to set that mood.
Very well done.

Thank you very much bjorn! Alway happy when my songs touch people in any way. :)

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Really good stuff and a definite Ultravox type vibe - I love all the vocals, they really are excellent. Good open mix as well

First Class

Nigel

 

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3 hours ago, Bajan Blue said:

Really good stuff and a definite Ultravox type vibe - I love all the vocals, they really are excellent. Good open mix as well

First Class

Nigel

 

Thank you very much for your kind words Nigel. :)

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Whatever it is, it's not worth selling your soul!  :D:D  I was expecting a happy song;   But you do write about that desperate feeling very well,  musically and lyrically.

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1 hour ago, David Sprouse said:

Whatever it is, it's not worth selling your soul!  :D:D  I was expecting a happy song;   But you do write about that desperate feeling very well,  musically and lyrically.

Hehe, yeah i guess the title is a tiny bit missleading. ;) Thank you very much for listening and your kind words! :)

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Nice production and performances. Nice marriage of the lyric and musical mood. 

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A little darker than the title, but all good!

I'll agree with others on the mix, well done!

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my thanks to Ed, I'm way behind, thought I'd got past the 5th, but obviously not..........

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