Douglas Kirby 441 Posted August 14 Hi Everybody, This is a track off of my album "The Westerly Sessions Vol. I". This song is a bit different from my usual fare - it's really a duet, but I don't know any female singers, so I sang the female part on the harmony. As always, any comment or critiques are welcome, and thanks for listening. Here it is: https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14058132 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sabby Brown 30 Posted August 14 Your vocal sounds a bit like early Jagger ... some might think the reverb and drums are a bit hot but I think they make this song worth another listen .. I like this track a lot ! Sabby 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 678 Posted August 14 More great Kirby from ya Doug. A tiny crit, I'd put a high pass on the acoustic; that and the bass are creating a bit of mud in the low mids. I'd roll it up until the acoustic is well defined and the bass is free to breath; just my nickel98, take it with a grain of salt. 4 hours ago, Sabby Brown said: the reverb and drums are a bit hot That's part of the Kirby sound... 😉 👍 t 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wookiee 773 Posted August 15 Pleasant little tune Douglas, I do wonder if it just wanders on a little to long I did listen to the end. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bajan Blue 306 Posted August 15 Douglas - nice track - agree perhaps a little long and a bit muddy in low mids?? Apart from that, cool stuff Nigel 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ABull 75 Posted August 15 Cool demo Douglas though a bit hot sometimes. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 441 Posted August 16 On 8/14/2020 at 6:24 AM, Sabby Brown said: Your vocal sounds a bit like early Jagger ... some might think the reverb and drums are a bit hot but I think they make this song worth another listen .. I like this track a lot ! Sabby Thanks Sabby - I'm glad you liked it and thanks for listening. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 441 Posted August 16 On 8/14/2020 at 10:56 AM, DeeringAmps said: More great Kirby from ya Doug. A tiny crit, I'd put a high pass on the acoustic; that and the bass are creating a bit of mud in the low mids. I'd roll it up until the acoustic is well defined and the bass is free to breath; just my nickel98, take it with a grain of salt. That's part of the Kirby sound... 😉 👍 t Hey Tom - I agree with you about the low mids after giving it another listen. I'm going to do another remix - perhaps today. I appreciate your ears - thanks. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 441 Posted August 16 21 hours ago, Wookiee said: Pleasant little tune Douglas, I do wonder if it just wanders on a little to long I did listen to the end. Hey Wookiee - Thanks for listening. I think I agree with you on the end being a bit too long. On the remix I may cut out 8 bars at the end to tidy it up some. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 441 Posted August 16 21 hours ago, Bajan Blue said: Douglas - nice track - agree perhaps a little long and a bit muddy in low mids?? Apart from that, cool stuff Nigel Hey Nigel - thanks for listening and for your comments. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 441 Posted August 16 11 hours ago, ABull said: Cool demo Douglas though a bit hot sometimes. Thanks for listening Allan. Perhaps the drums are a bit hot - but I kind of like that sound in my mixes. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bjornpdx 535 Posted August 17 Really like the chorus (and the rest of the song) - sounds 60s pop to me. As usual guitar is excellent. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 441 Posted August 17 9 hours ago, bjornpdx said: Really like the chorus (and the rest of the song) - sounds 60s pop to me. As usual guitar is excellent. Hi Bjorn - yeah, I don't know where this song came from - perhaps you're right calling it 60's pop. I've never written a duet before, so it was unusual for me. Thanks for listening. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Grem 2,132 Posted August 17 Good song Douglas. I like the sound of the guitars in the chorus. You did good job on the vocals and the harmony. Agree with the early Jagger comment! Good mix for me. I like it. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
daryl1968 350 Posted August 17 This is different from your usual stuff. Still cool though - I like the big reverb on the drums Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 441 Posted August 18 23 hours ago, Grem said: Good song Douglas. I like the sound of the guitars in the chorus. You did good job on the vocals and the harmony. Agree with the early Jagger comment! Good mix for me. I like it. Hey Grem - thanks for your comments - I appreciate it. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 441 Posted August 18 19 hours ago, daryl1968 said: This is different from your usual stuff. Still cool though - I like the big reverb on the drums Hey Daryl - thanks for giving my song a listen. I like the reverb on the drums as well. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Starise 751 Posted August 18 Douglas this is a nice rocker well done. Thanks for sharing. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lynn Wilson 372 Posted August 18 Douglas, I think I could pick your voice out of a crowded room, and I mean that as a compliment! You found your niche, and you make the most of it. It's always fun to just let the player go on after the first song. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Douglas Kirby 441 Posted August 19 21 hours ago, Starise said: Douglas this is a nice rocker well done. Thanks for sharing. Hey Starise - thanks for giving my song a listen. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
