``CIRCUS RIDE´´

[Paul Bush 61]

Hello once again chaps, well I think I may be slowly getting the hang of this recording malarky , ``Circus ride´´ is my latest offering once again taking a hell a lot of your advice on board and checking out the `` creative sauce´´ web site that was also really helpful , cheers PB

 

[DeeringAmps 450]

You've kind of fallen through the cracks here Paul. I think I'd build a little more in the pre-chorus.
I hear an organ in there somewhere; I think I'd bring that up a bit.

Overall, to me, its a good demo. Now lets build a little more energy throughout and hit that 3:16 mark running.

t

[Paul Bush 61]

Thanks  t  as always good advice , I´ll give it another listening now and take stock ,

[Bajan Blue 173]

Hi Paul

I think everything's there, but I do think pre chorus and chorus need to be a bit more dynamic.

Otherwise, good job

Nigel

 

[emeraldsoul 723]

I really love the groove and the chord progression!

Mix-wise, the bass is right up front . The drums are way back. So you might take the reverb distance down on the drums, and see how that sits better? Worth a shot.

 

that's a cool production, nice job!!!

-Tom

 

[Paul Bush 61]

Thanks Tom ,Ive just bought a new pair of headphones Sehnheisser HD 280 pro for the mix down stage and they`ve helped me to get a better overall feel of the mixdown  so after many hearings I i think i may have unmudlled it alhough there´s always room for improvement  so its now time take on board tips and  reflection ready for the next mixdown ..oh and I made a video aas well cheers PB

 

Edited June 22 by Paul Bush

[Lynn 273]

Great song that is aptly named!  This is close to being a diy masterpiece and very entertaining.  You've gotten good advice, but whether you do anything or not, this is a good song.  I enjoyed it both times!

[Paul Bush 61]

Hi Lynn , yeah  I`m definately doing a re-mix , there´s no high points in there I sort of overlooked  that aspect of the song , its great to get a second + pairs of ears on my songs  cheers pb