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Mick Button

I Believe in Love - my own song

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A bit different to my last track and self penned. My voice has limited range but did my best. Tell me what you think?

 

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Very nice slow burn! I like that pace. Moody Blues came to mind! For a crit, you might go back and volume automate down some of the mouth noises that invariably come right before you start a vocal line, or between the vocal sections.

It's a good vocal, particularly with your bgv's . . . and I really like your song! Sparse, mellow, meaningful.

 

cheers,

-Tom

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I have to say I agree with Tom.
I would maybe bring the chorus vocal up a taste and pull the solo down just a bit? Not a big deal.
Much prefer the final fade on this one.
Overall nicely done.

tom

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This is  pleasant listen, I never crit vocals, Wookiee vocals kill all none Wookiee life forms within a Parsec or two in the native tongue ;).

Good stuff keep em coming.

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I like the contemplative lyrics and the general feel of everything. Your voice has a nice tone, with a bit more diaphramatic support you'd sound stronger in all of your phrases as you do in your opening phrases.

I don't personally care for the guitar sound. You might have technical limitations there and if that's the case so be it. I found it to be the most distracting part of the whole thing. The tone specifically, not the playing or the cadence of it.

I'd say that you've got a talent here and need to just keep pushing yourself! Thanks for sharing.

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You express a great sentiment in this song.  Actually your vocals sound great to me because in a quiet way (perfect for the lyrics and melody) you express some good emotion.  On my headphones the instrumentation panned R sounded a wee bit strong --- but --- then again, it could be my equipment. 

Excellent work!!!

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Hi Mick,

Great song with special lyrics fits your delivery perfectly.

Love the BGVs and well thought out instrumentation.

Thanks for sharing.

Good Job!

regards

paul

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What a great song!  I like your voice alot, it is sincere.  We have an awful lot conceptual left brain stuff  in this forum.  It's nice to hear it come from the heart.

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Very mellow vibe but fits the subject matter. The mix crits have been covered so I'll just say ditto except the solo jumped out at me maybe a fade in automation where the first few notes are about 2db lower and build up. 🙂 

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