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Bandlab's @kiwichrys performs vocals on this original tune.

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Lyrics

If there are words you've never said before, 
tell them to me, and I'll tell you.
Precious time is running out, while I'm watching...
as I'm watching.
Before you go.

It's been a while since we've...held each others hand.
I'll hold it now, as your eyes are asking why....
why this has to end.  It breaks my heart.

There's a doctor in the house, who wears compassion on his sleeve...
telling everyone, that God is make believe.
And every silence takes my breath, until the breathing starts again.
When you open up your eyes, do you recognize my face.


Seconds ticking slowly in the dark of night.
Flowers scent the air, a reminder, of this world's friends.
Tether's almost broken, pretty soon, you'll go.

If there are words you've never said before, 
tell them to me, and I'll tell you.
Precious time is running out, while I'm watching...
as I'm watching.
Before you go.

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Quite a sad song (lyric-wise), but loved the production and performances. Very clean and clear mix.....nice work Steve!! :)

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Steve, this is very special and unique at the same time.  I like the way you think out of the box, and I find it very educational.  I'm gonna have to jump back into this song a few more times to grok the coolness of the arrangement.  Stay busy and healthy!

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19 hours ago, Mesh said:

Quite a sad song (lyric-wise), but loved the production and performances. Very clean and clear mix.....nice work Steve!! :)

Thank you for listening!

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19 hours ago, Lynn said:

Steve, this is very special and unique at the same time.  I like the way you think out of the box, and I find it very educational.  I'm gonna have to jump back into this song a few more times to grok the coolness of the arrangement.  Stay busy and healthy!

Thanks Lynn - Usually it is tough for me to write lyrics - I am very happy with how this one came out.

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yeah I like this one a lot great recording really in yer face ......dare i say your voice reminds me a little of the great Nils Lofgren and thats a compliment nice one

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Cool song - I really liked the lead guitar - sounded excellent. I liked the lead vocal as well.

The mix sounded quite nice to my ears.

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This has all the hallmarks of a show tune, production, composition, playing and mix are all excellently performed. 

s much as the may seem a strange thing to say @steve@baselines.com this is worth an :) 

(PM if you want to know what it means)

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9 hours ago, Paul Bush said:

yeah I like this one a lot great recording really in yer face ......dare i say your voice reminds me a little of the great Nils Lofgren and thats a compliment nice one

Thank you - that is @kiwichrys doing the vocal on this one - she is great.

 

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6 hours ago, Douglas Kirby said:

Cool song - I really liked the lead guitar - sounded excellent. I liked the lead vocal as well.

The mix sounded quite nice to my ears.

Thanks a lot Douglas!

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