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New song "This Gravity".

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On the Adam's her voice seems to lack weight, the rest of the mix comes across well, thanks for sharing.

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hey nchardy, 

vocals are really nice on this, but as mentioned, I'd give them more presence.  I'd also suggest a little less verb, everything's dripping.

the BGVs are "off" - not sure what it is - do you have a flanger on them or something?  something sounds off there.

nice guitar all through!

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I agree with the comments posted so far.  Overall, really good production, but everything is really dripping in reverb.  Lessening the reverb may make the Lead vocal easier to understand.  The Lead vocal needs more presence and clarity.  Vocalist does a nice job singing and her vocals go well with this song.

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Me Too on the comments above. The singer has an appealing unique voice but I couldn't understand most of the lyrics. Aside from that, very good production on the song. Sounds professional.

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nchardy, Great tune with a catchy lyrics and melody line. The vocalist does a nice job as do the accompanying vocals. Maybe you chanegd the mix since the last comments. I could hear her well in the mix, I picked up on what sounded like a flange effect aside from the guitar flange...or I guess that's what it was?  It wasn't bad or overt. 

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It was a cool song to listen to - but that effect on the lead vocal - not sure it works for me.  Someone above mentioned it sounds like a flanger/chorus/phaser - maybe take that off the vocal. Everything else sounds fine to me.

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