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Love that guitar riff. And the other one with the phaser (flanger?) Vocals egg-sell-int!!!   Another great one from you. 

Mix-wise I'd suck away a lot of the boom from those drums, and rein in the bass guitar as well.

 

cheers,

-Tom

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Hi Douglas,

Love the booming drums at the start which announce a great rock tune which does not disappoint.

Great lyrics and fantastic guitar solo - well played.

Thanks for sharing.

Good Job!

regards

paul

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DeeringAmps - Thank you very much for listening and for your comments.

David Sprouse - Thank you for the compliment - I enjoy writing lyrics - you never know what's going to come of it.

JohnBee58 - Thanks for lending your ears to my tune.

emeraldsoul - I'll give the mix another listen based on your comments - thanks.

thegaltieribrothers - Thank you very much for your comments.

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This a good song with good lyrics.

Sounds a little boomy to me.
 

Once again ... well done.
I always state this...  but we all paint very different pictures...  these are just my personal views and what I would have done and in no way is it meant to diminish the work you have done here.

I am listening on  Focal TRIO6 BE

 

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2 hours ago, garybrun said:

This a good song with good lyrics.

Sounds a little boomy to me.
 

Once again ... well done.
I always state this...  but we all paint very different pictures...  these are just my personal views and what I would have done and in no way is it meant to diminish the work you have done here.

I am listening on  Focal TRIO6 BE

 

Thanks Gary - I'll revisit the mix since both you and emeraldsoul think it's a bit boomy.

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On 2/20/2020 at 9:34 AM, garybrun said:

This a good song with good lyrics.

Sounds a little boomy to me.
 

Once again ... well done.
I always state this...  but we all paint very different pictures...  these are just my personal views and what I would have done and in no way is it meant to diminish the work you have done here.

I am listening on  Focal TRIO6 BE

 

I agree with Gary - great melodies and lyrics but there is some digital distortion with the final mix/master

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I would back off the reverb on the drums in this production.  They get lost in this mix and need to be a more prominent part of the song to drive it along.  I’m not sure what’s going on with the Bass because I’m not hearing it well either?  Those two elements becoming more prominent in the mix would help this production a lot.  
 

Great lyrics, vocals and guitar play!

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Douglas
Another great rock song though I have to say it sounds a bit like your others. Not that that takes anything away - I like the song and I admire the musicianship - but I think you could vary the formula a little.

Love the guitar and vocal as always.

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daryl1968 - Thanks for giving the song a listen - I did another remix so I hope I got rid of the boom.

michaelhanson - Thanks for the compliments - I took your advice and backed off some reverb on the drums and I brought up the bass - thanks for your suggestions.

bjornpdx - Thanks for your comments and for giving my song a listen.

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4 minutes ago, michaelhanson said:

Much better Douglas.  

Thanks Michael - appreciate you giving it another listen - your comments on the mix were spot-on.

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