martsave martin s 182 Posted January 25, 2020 (edited) song title Mon DIEUX revient any coments, advices & feedback are welcome lyrics & music Eric L arrangements & production Martin S thx martin Edited January 25, 2020 by martsave martin s 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Paul Bush 345 Posted January 26, 2020 On 1/25/2020 at 12:03 PM, martsave martin s said: song title Mon DIEUX revient any coments, advices & feedback are welcome lyrics & music Eric L arrangements & production Martin S thx martin Great song love the intro snare sound , vocal was way upfront super guitare work Ooohh yeah well done 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
martsave martin s 182 Posted January 26, 2020 1 hour ago, Paul Bush said: Great song love the intro snare sound , vocal was way upfront super guitare work Ooohh yeah well done thank you paul i appreciate your coment! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
martsave martin s 182 Posted January 26, 2020 (edited) 43 minutes ago, martsave martin s said: vocal was way upfront really it's always a 'battle' inside me to mix the vocals.......🙂 Edited January 26, 2020 by martsave martin s Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PhonoBrainer 2,001 Posted January 26, 2020 Vocals have a nice grit on them, and you might add in just a bit of some lower mids on them. The rhythm guitar is very well played throughout, for whatever reason I found myself focusing on that, and missing it when it wasn't there. I'd say your background vocals have a cool part and it's a nice add but their sound is a bit muffled, like you used a totally different mic, something more low-fi? I'm not a great mixer of vocals myself, but listen to the clarity of lead voc, organ, rhythm guitars - then listen to the bgv's. Big difference. I'd like to hear what if anything you do to this! BTW what's it about? I thought I heard "eric Clapton" as a lyric? Probably crazy, I am. cheers, -Tom Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
martsave martin s 182 Posted January 26, 2020 (edited) thank you Tom im i make consideration of your coments! Edited January 26, 2020 by martsave martin s Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bjornpdx 1,151 Posted January 27, 2020 martin Excellent guitar work. I thought the drum intro went on a bit too long and didn't lead in to the song naturally. Except for that nit, I enjoyed the song. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
martsave martin s 182 Posted January 27, 2020 (edited) thank you Bjorn Edited January 27, 2020 by martsave martin s Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 2,067 Posted January 30, 2020 Martin, you’ve got another good one going. A few rough edges to sort, and some good comments and avenues to pursue. I like the drums, I wouldn’t change the intro, although the cymbal hits late in the tune don’t seem to sit in the same space; that I would work on. As always wish we had the lyrics so we could follow along; in French is fine. Keep us up to date! t 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
martsave martin s 182 Posted January 30, 2020 thank you DeeringAmps Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
