martsave martin s 182 Posted December 29, 2019 (edited) hello all im on my way to mix this music compo i made(i just added the vocal in the mix)the lyric are from a friend of mine it's a french lyrics compo title Avec Toi ps(all instruments are real instruments,bass,guit acoustic,guitar electric played by me & (session drumer 3)and piano SFZ thanks for listening and coments here soundcloud martin Edited December 29, 2019 by martsave martin s Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jesse Screed 954 Posted December 29, 2019 for me, I must wait to hear the lyrics, but I do like it so far. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
martsave martin s 182 Posted December 29, 2019 2 hours ago, Jesse Screed said: I must wait to hear the lyrics i just added the vocals thanks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David Sprouse 812 Posted December 29, 2019 More woodblock! (snl joke).Loved it much better with the words. Can you list the lyrics somewhere? You have a cool voice. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DeeringAmps 2,165 Posted December 29, 2019 Hey Martin, My high school French is a bit "rusty", so I can't comment on the lyrics, melody is good. That clicking sound effect, its just a little (a lot maybe) loud for me. At first I thought it was the nut on one of the acoustics "popping"; you know when the string is tight in the nut and lets go "bing!"? Are the acoustics just a little dry, maybe? Overall sounds like you're making good progress, I like it! Tom Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
martsave martin s 182 Posted December 29, 2019 23 minutes ago, David Sprouse said: More woodblock! (snl joke).Loved it much better with the words. Can you list the lyrics somewhere? You have a cool voice. you mean adding some woodblock? cool not for now it's my friend vox thanks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
martsave martin s 182 Posted December 29, 2019 (edited) 22 minutes ago, DeeringAmps said: That clicking sound effect, its just a little (a lot maybe) loud for me. ok thanks i will re-listen it Are the acoustics just a little dry, maybe? will look at this thanks Overall sounds like you're making good progress, I like it! thanks im working hard to sound good... thanks martin Edited December 29, 2019 by martsave martin s Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mark skinner 897 Posted December 31, 2019 I really liked the slow groove on this one. The acoustic guitars came across nicely , and far off electric was a nice touch. Good job ! mark Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
thegaltieribrothers 226 Posted January 3, 2020 Hi martsave martin s Nice relaxed tune, with good vocals + a tidy guitar solo. Thanks for sharing. Good Job! regards paul Share this post Link to post Share on other sites