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David Sprouse

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  1. wait was that a pic of cannon beach oregon in there?! haha Your songs and videos are hauntingly beautiful.
  2. Great cover. Did you do this for fun, or do you sell to publishers?
  3. Makke, Keith and Bjorn thanks for the review!
  4. This has sort of a christian theme, Better Day
  5. Who did the solos during the instrumental? Loved the raw performance and goofy audio, made authentic. All the smiles seemed so sincere!
  6. you're a *whom* expert. (most people would have said in who, but you're right). This is a great song and presented so well. Love your voice. I'm a high church kind of guy (boring) but contemporary christian music is growing on me. Great job.
  7. This'd be perfect for THE HASTY PUDDING CLUB. Is that your P**sy?
  8. David Sprouse

    Hobo boots

    Ya, the seafoam green guitar is rad. Makke, you have that sound down. Tone is perfect.
  9. Max thank you so much for taking the time out of your busy day to listen to my music. Glad you liked it.
  10. TomT, Douglas and Wookie, thanks for the feedback. Lynn your words are always encouraging. Y'all have a happy mother's day. :D:D
  11. Freddie, one of the best reviews I've ever received! Thank you for taking the time out of your busy day to listen to my music.
  12. The love bus. Thanks for listening vechung, I'm a fan.
  13. I'd sequence the third phrase of each stanza (in the verses) down or up a whole step for variety(it can help to avoid that iambic bouncy-ness). Otherwise, I like the musical performances, and it's an interesting perspective on this whole mess that we call society. :D:D (democracy is messy <col. rumsfeld>)
  14. Almost sounds like an ad placement. Nice one!
  15. Can you write the lyrics out, I couldn't quite understand them. Really fun song.
  16. simple tune that came to me at a bus stop. Between ozone and bandcamp, this got SO compressed. https://davidsprouse.bandcamp.com/track/waiting-here-2
  17. David Sprouse

    Lara

    Omg is that an ovation guitar? I'm glad you don't autotune. Of all the people here, your songs are the most interesting simply on the strength of your lyrics. It keeps my attention throughout. I wish someone loved me the way you loved this person. :D:D
  18. Once the song got going your voice really shined. Falsetto often sounds so err, not good. You really did a great job. How did you reverse engineer the synths? Did queen do this?
  19. The video reminded me of some of the first iterations of MYST. Like bjorn said, the music yields the desired effect. So what's your frequency?
  20. Studied it for years, but never really got under my skin.
  21. You do realize that origins of the word jazz don't you?
  22. Joshi, Your music is well written, such a clear structure Do you play classical guitar? Might want to modulate here and there. You do a great job of varying the melody and texture, but the harmony is kind of static.
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