you're a *whom* expert. (most people would have said in who, but you're right). This is a great song and presented so well. Love your voice. I'm a high church kind of guy (boring) but contemporary christian music is growing on me. Great job.
I'd sequence the third phrase of each stanza (in the verses) down or up a whole step for variety(it can help to avoid that iambic bouncy-ness). Otherwise, I like the musical performances, and it's an interesting perspective on this whole mess that we call society. :D:D (democracy is messy <col. rumsfeld>)
Omg is that an ovation guitar? I'm glad you don't autotune. Of all the people here, your songs are the most interesting simply on the strength of your lyrics. It keeps my attention throughout. I wish someone loved me the way you loved this person. :D:D
Once the song got going your voice really shined. Falsetto often sounds so err, not good. You really did a great job. How did you reverse engineer the synths? Did queen do this?
Joshi, Your music is well written, such a clear structure Do you play classical guitar? Might want to modulate here and there. You do a great job of varying the melody and texture, but the harmony is kind of static.