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  1. Hi friends , well this one came out of the blue and was a lot of fun to do, its rare that sometimes things come rather easily ??  as always all comments are welcome Ive added the lyrics ..so you can make head and tail of it cheers   paul

    Well you told all your girlfriends, And you kept him to your self      OOH. No time is ever the righ time, coz youre still a dadies girl

    Well I taught you about dangers, maybe thats the main attraction  ,OOH..Youre not playing a part on a cheap T.V.show

    chorus 

    Well breaks my heart when I see my little  baby making fool of herself , well it brings me tears, when I see the fear as she`s

    falling apart, Well its just like a curse , It feels even worse  when there´s nothing the world I can do,

    Except help with the pain,and try to explain, and sing a la la  lulabye Oohh lalalaaaa...... sing a lulaby......

    Well she looks just like her mother, she got her stubbornness too She got the anger in her eyes, turning red into blue

    When she makes a wrong desision, she`ll turn it back on you She got the face of an angel,but the devils looking back at you

                                                                          ..…..chorus........….outro  solo......

     

     

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  2. Hi Barry you could sing the phone book and I´d be hooked , I loved the story , the production was great your voice just sublime , the strings came in and then the Telecaster ? another  great piece of work Barry thanks for sharing cheers paul 

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  3. Just such a super vocal ,I would’ve liked some higher backing vocals but that’s just me super project ..cheers P

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  4. Hi Allan, I always really like your lyric`s and songs,  great hook ``Mr together is coming apart ´´ ... I hate make comparisons but it`s got that Ray Davis (Kinks) feel to it which just super,...... proper songwriting, a proper song , properly done  , cheers paul 

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  5. Hi people here´s the new one rather quickly written and rerecorded a rare occurrence...    as always I´ll enjoy any comments you may have cheers Paul

    verse 1

    I´m sick and tired of all this waiting , for those better days ,   Sick and tired of my complaining , There`s got to be a better way

    Well I`ve been thinking about the things that might help , Those lame excuses I`ve been telling myself

    All those lists I wrote are back on that old shelf ,   One step forwards then one more back again

    Chorus

    Well im looking for a new love, a true love, a snowy white dove to help me find my way , A new heart, a fresh start, a shiny new

    car to help me drive away...... There`s no rhyme or reason running from your daemons, You gotta face the facts and look

    within......... Stop being ``Oh so Precious´´ cheap plastic and pretensious, Consieted is the 7th deadly sin

    verse2

    All my friends are out there flying, They`re getting all the breaks What I get is whats left over , not down to my bad mistakes

    It´s very easy to point out the who`s to blame As long as its not me in the frame

    I´m avoiding that old mirror of shame One step forwards then one more back again

    Chorus

    chorus outro

    I´m searching for a new life , from this daily strife

    avoiding the truth , that s gonna cause me some pain

    A new plan, thats easyer than, the one that I got

    Thats left me out in the rain

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  6. Yes nice track all right I thought the vocals could have been a little louder , The acoustic guitar panned to the right got a bit too much with time, it worked for the intro maybe if doubled left and right for the verses would have  balanced it out a bit , just my thoughts .nice one cheers P 

  7. Hi Nigel super professional video and song  , loved the guitar tone(what was it?) , vocals are just so super fine lovely production , keeps us on our toes, now I know what to aim for ,, cheers paul

  8. Thanks to all that commented greatly appreciated , this one was a long hard struggle from the writing stage all the way through  just one of those things , no sooner had I posted  this one the next song  shot out from the dark and was  by and large written in a couple of hours (not recorded) so its been a joy to see the next come together so easily (sorry Noynekker no solo in this one either) once again cheers to all Paul

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  9. Hi people , here´s a new one a ``Life and soul of the Party´´ these things can go sadly wrong sometimes , that car trip home can be deafening in it`s silence  ..

    Well your sparkling eyes hide, those tell tale signs that´s inside

    Informing me its time to find our coats, make excuses and go

    Was I borìsh ? I thought I was more`ìsh

    The Life and soul, The way they gathered around me hanging on every word

    chorus
    Was I dancing on the ceiling , just super apealing

    Standing out from the crowd , Was´nt I delectable,

    was`nt I deliriouse, Down right Dandy, and hilarious ,

     

    Well you`re squeezing my hand real tight, as you refuse the traffic

    lights The sinking feeling that alls not right,sobers me up in the

     (was too serious )

    pale moonlight... Did I get seriouse I thought I was mysterious

    oblivirous

    Were my jokes too raw did I hit another nerve , hanging on every word

    chorus

    Bridge

    Stop this room from spinning around all over me

    flashbacks and blackouts.... shadowing me.........

    Ive played this scene before like a film in slow motion

    Stop it now and let me sleep...........

     

    Well I wake up but my minds still a maze,

    I remember dancing a brand new craze, the music stopped

    and everybody stared, I fell down and thats when I fell from grace ,

    Was I insulting, was I embarrassing

    Were my jokes too raw did I hit another nerve ,

         chorus and outro

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  10. 8 hours ago, Kevin Walsh said:

    Thanks, Paul! Yep, they are clearer, good ear!  My voice comes and goes these days. The choruses and harmonies  were recorded on a good voice day and the verses were done on a poor voice day. 😁 If a a good day rolls around again I may go back and re-record the verses, but since it's just all for the fun of it, I probably won't. 🤪

    Thanks for listening and thanks for your feedback!

    Yeah the same here good and bad days with my voice (since a Covid) although I do make sure I do a 15 minute vocal warm up  with a backing tape before I record its makes all the difference cheers P

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  11. Yep i liked this, some great guitar stuff going on in there , I thought the vocals in the chorus were somehow clearer than in the verses , the hook in the chorus worked really well , from a songwriting point of view  (just my taste) It flew right out from the gate and didn’t take a breather , great song cheers P

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  12. Didn’t like it at first but it just got better and better , very Zappa-ist and I didnt want it to stop, so yeah great stuff ,cheers P

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