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Hi Barry you could sing the phone book and I´d be hooked , I loved the story , the production was great your voice just sublime , the strings came in and then the Telecaster ? another great piece of work Barry thanks for sharing cheers paul
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Just such a super vocal ,I would’ve liked some higher backing vocals but that’s just me super project ..cheers P
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Hi Allan, I always really like your lyric`s and songs, great hook ``Mr together is coming apart ´´ ... I hate make comparisons but it`s got that Ray Davis (Kinks) feel to it which just super,...... proper songwriting, a proper song , properly done , cheers paul
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Thanks everyone for the lovely comments , as I said this was rather a quickie which is rare these days, so all in all an enjoyable project to do
once again thanks to all Paul...
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Hi people here´s the new one rather quickly written and rerecorded a rare occurrence... as always I´ll enjoy any comments you may have cheers Paul
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I´m sick and tired of all this waiting , for those better days , Sick and tired of my complaining , There`s got to be a better way
Well I`ve been thinking about the things that might help , Those lame excuses I`ve been telling myself
All those lists I wrote are back on that old shelf , One step forwards then one more back again
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Well im looking for a new love, a true love, a snowy white dove to help me find my way , A new heart, a fresh start, a shiny new
car to help me drive away...... There`s no rhyme or reason running from your daemons, You gotta face the facts and look
within......... Stop being ``Oh so Precious´´ cheap plastic and pretensious, Consieted is the 7th deadly sin
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All my friends are out there flying, They`re getting all the breaks What I get is whats left over , not down to my bad mistakes
It´s very easy to point out the who`s to blame As long as its not me in the frame
I´m avoiding that old mirror of shame One step forwards then one more back again
Chorus
chorus outro
I´m searching for a new life , from this daily strife
avoiding the truth , that s gonna cause me some pain
A new plan, thats easyer than, the one that I got
Thats left me out in the rain
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Hi Barry I Loved this the first time I heard it and I´m loving even more great great song as always love your voice thanks Paul
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Yeah I concur with all of the above , really nice production , horns did the trick wasn’t expecting them..a bonus cheers P
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Your vocals are so good , took me in after the first two notes , guitar sound s just fine , the whole production bloody lovely cheers , Paul really lovely
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Hi there Treesha I´m trying to find a musical comparison , but I gave up, great video loved those bright colours fitted perfectly with the song , great vocals really picked me up cheers paul
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Now if only I could play slide half as good as this i´d be rather happy , great track as always nice one cheers P
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Yes nice track all right I thought the vocals could have been a little louder , The acoustic guitar panned to the right got a bit too much with time, it worked for the intro maybe if doubled left and right for the verses would have balanced it out a bit , just my thoughts .nice one cheers P
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Hi Nigel super professional video and song , loved the guitar tone(what was it?) , vocals are just so super fine lovely production , keeps us on our toes, now I know what to aim for ,, cheers paul
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Thanks to all that commented greatly appreciated , this one was a long hard struggle from the writing stage all the way through just one of those things , no sooner had I posted this one the next song shot out from the dark and was by and large written in a couple of hours (not recorded) so its been a joy to see the next come together so easily (sorry Noynekker no solo in this one either) once again cheers to all Paul
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Hi people , here´s a new one a ``Life and soul of the Party´´ these things can go sadly wrong sometimes , that car trip home can be deafening in it`s silence ..
Well your sparkling eyes hide, those tell tale signs that´s inside
Informing me its time to find our coats, make excuses and go
Was I borìsh ? I thought I was more`ìsh
The Life and soul, The way they gathered around me hanging on every word
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Was I dancing on the ceiling , just super apealingStanding out from the crowd , Was´nt I delectable,
was`nt I deliriouse, Down right Dandy, and hilarious ,
Well you`re squeezing my hand real tight, as you refuse the traffic
lights The sinking feeling that alls not right,sobers me up in the
(was too serious )
pale moonlight... Did I get seriouse I thought I was mysterious
oblivirous
Were my jokes too raw did I hit another nerve , hanging on every word
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Bridge
Stop this room from spinning around all over me
flashbacks and blackouts.... shadowing me.........
Ive played this scene before like a film in slow motion
Stop it now and let me sleep...........
Well I wake up but my minds still a maze,
I remember dancing a brand new craze, the music stopped
and everybody stared, I fell down and thats when I fell from grace ,
Was I insulting, was I embarrassing
Were my jokes too raw did I hit another nerve ,
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8 hours ago, Kevin Walsh said:
Thanks, Paul! Yep, they are clearer, good ear! My voice comes and goes these days. The choruses and harmonies were recorded on a good voice day and the verses were done on a poor voice day. 😁 If a a good day rolls around again I may go back and re-record the verses, but since it's just all for the fun of it, I probably won't. 🤪
Thanks for listening and thanks for your feedback!
Yeah the same here good and bad days with my voice (since a Covid) although I do make sure I do a 15 minute vocal warm up with a backing tape before I record its makes all the difference cheers P
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Hi Barry, another great one, guitars sound sublime , vocals as usual lovely , thanks for sharing , cheers P
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Sounds very professional , super vocals , Loved this song,really well put together , just super tone and balance, cheers p
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Yep i liked this, some great guitar stuff going on in there , I thought the vocals in the chorus were somehow clearer than in the verses , the hook in the chorus worked really well , from a songwriting point of view (just my taste) It flew right out from the gate and didn’t take a breather , great song cheers P
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Yeah C´mon Barry this is one of your best , always love your voice , so much depth and feeling , (as always) great song so beautifully produced , well done mate cheers Paul
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Yeah this flies ... It has that recorded in a barn sound ..whers´the video? nice one ...
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Its really not my bag maan , but that said , bloody vocals were on top form , lots happening on in there really hits the rock spot super solo guitar , (very envious) great track cheers P
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I liked the song although it sounded unreal at times , but still rather nice ...
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Yep lots in there loved the guitar tones, sounded real fine , cheers p
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Hi friends , well this one came out of the blue and was a lot of fun to do, its rare that sometimes things come rather easily ?? as always all comments are welcome Ive added the lyrics ..so you can make head and tail of it cheers paul
Well you told all your girlfriends, And you kept him to your self OOH. No time is ever the righ time, coz youre still a dadies girl
Well I taught you about dangers, maybe thats the main attraction ,OOH..Youre not playing a part on a cheap T.V.show
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Well breaks my heart when I see my little baby making fool of herself , well it brings me tears, when I see the fear as she`s
falling apart, Well its just like a curse , It feels even worse when there´s nothing the world I can do,
Except help with the pain,and try to explain, and sing a la la lulabye Oohh lalalaaaa...... sing a lulaby......
Well she looks just like her mother, she got her stubbornness too She got the anger in her eyes, turning red into blue
When she makes a wrong desision, she`ll turn it back on you She got the face of an angel,but the devils looking back at you
..…..chorus........….outro solo......