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Hey Paul. glad you like it -- thanks for listening & commenting -- -- Allan.

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Hey Nigel, thanks for commenting -- yeah, it's so quiet cos it's an unmastered rough mix -- so no limiting and such -- thanks mate -- 😉 -- Allan.

Hey Tom, thanks for listening & commenting -- much appreciated -- :) -- Allan.

Hey Paul, glad ya like my meandering -- thanks for commenting -- 😉 -- Allan.

Hi Freddy, thanks for those kind comments -- I'm pleased you like the song and performances 😉 -- Allan.

Thanks Douglas 😉 -- Allan.

Yeah, Paul, those drums need some work and they need to be up in the mix too! Some good changes in this and your voice is really good -- phrasing and tone. Some very nice guitar lines and such particularly in the instrumental section -- lots of creativity-- another good one 😉 -- Allan.

Hey Douglas, this has a very New York circa late 70s feel to it -- esp. your vocals. The mix is great on this -- really like that bass (what kinda bass is that?) I like how you brought in the different guitars later in the song -- makes for interesting listening. Cool guitar part and tone on that lead section -- almost getting a bit Tom Verlaine there. -- Good work, mate. This is my favorite I've heard from you -- 😉 -- Allan.

Hey Freddy, another good demo of another good song from you -- that catalog keeps growin' -- my only nit is that the different reverbs kinda compete in places -- a smear so to speak. 😉-- Allan.

Hey Craig -- thanks for commenting -- I'm glad you like the song and performances -- this song is not anti-religion per se -- it's against anyone thinking that any mere mortal could ever know the reality of the ultimate mystery (and yeah, I realize that stating that is also presumptuous) --😉 -- Allan

Hey Jimbo -- glad ya like the song and thanks for commenting :) -- Allan.

I reloaded this from SC because the volume wasn't right in certain sections...

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Other posters have remarked on the specifics of how this demo might be improved (and hey, we can all use advice on how to do that, right?) so...I'll just say that this is another good example of your creativity Freddy -- you come up with some new angles and ways of seeing things. And, you find new ways of arranging blues motifs so now you have a big catalog of some very good songs in that genre. Bravo to you, mate -- Allan.

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

Mr. Freddy, thank YOU for your nice comments -- I'm sorry I missed your recent song -- I'll get right to it! -- Allan.

Hey mate, thanks for mentioning that "instr." section -- glad you appreciated that -- Allan.

Hi Paul, I appreciate those kind words -- thanks for taking the time to listen/comment -- Allan.

Hi Treesha, well I wouldn't call it a "fun" song but I'm glad you like it -- thanks -- Allan.

Thanks for listening and taking the time to comment -- I'm glad you like what you heard -- Allan.

Hey Tim, thanks for those comments -- in particular, re: the vocals -- much appreciated -- Allan.

Hi Eric, so glad you like it -- yeah, I like those panning things too -- Allan.

Hey Tom, thanks for stopping by and taking a listen -- and thanks for your kind comments -- Allan.