kloon Posted January 23, 2019 Posted January 23, 2019 (edited) Hope you like it! Mary Has a Plan for Tonight I tried to embed but had no luck! Lyrics: Quote Mary has a plan for tonight She's gonna let out the demon inside She will take you for the ride of you life Better hold on tight Oh Mary has a plan for tonight You've got nowhere to run or hide She will take you to the highest of highs Better hold on tight She's here for a good time Not a long time A party for one She's a loaded gun She's here for a good time Not a long time In the midnight sun She's a loaded gun Mary has a plan for tonight Like an angel all dressed in white You've waited for this moment all your life Better hold on tight, Better hold on tight Oh Mary has a plan for tonight You'll think everything's alright But the love she gave could never be saved For the morning light She's here for a good time Not a long time A party for one She's a loaded gun She's here for a good time Not a long time In the midnight sun She's a loaded gun She's here for a good time Not a long time A party for one She's a loaded gun She's here for a good time Not a long time In the midnight sun She's a loaded gun Edited January 23, 2019 by kloon
David Sprouse Posted January 23, 2019 Posted January 23, 2019 I read the lyrics before I heard the song, I totally got the vibe wrong. I was waiting for you to go up an octave with that beautiful voice of yours!. Always so professional KLOON! 1
kloon Posted January 24, 2019 Author Posted January 24, 2019 5 hours ago, David Sprouse said: I read the lyrics before I heard the song, I totally got the vibe wrong. I was waiting for you to go up an octave with that beautiful voice of yours!. Always so professional KLOON! Thank you very much David!
James G Posted January 24, 2019 Posted January 24, 2019 Beautiful production, as always. Nice song too. 1
kloon Posted January 24, 2019 Author Posted January 24, 2019 2 hours ago, James G said: Beautiful production, as always. Nice song too. Thank you very much James!
PhonoBrainer Posted January 25, 2019 Posted January 25, 2019 This sounds '80's plus very modern. Love that combo. When your vocal gets to the word "tight" in the lower register, the volume dips on it just a bit. But I can still hear it. The second verse, the snare and all it's perfectly-crafted swoosh! is just as loud or louder than your vocals. But, I still get it. Great tune, mellow vibe, nice break at the end, and a killer mix. Plus a great lead vocal and bgv. This is a winner. cheers, -Tom 1
kloon Posted January 25, 2019 Author Posted January 25, 2019 Thank you very much Tom for listening, your kind words and good solid feedback.
kloon Posted January 25, 2019 Author Posted January 25, 2019 Thank you very much InstrEd & SPAK, appreciate it alot!
Douglas Kirby Posted January 26, 2019 Posted January 26, 2019 I really liked this one - especially your lead vocal. The mix sounds good with plenty of depth to it. Very cool way to end it - nicely done. 1
kloon Posted January 26, 2019 Author Posted January 26, 2019 1 hour ago, Douglas Kirby said: I really liked this one - especially your lead vocal. The mix sounds good with plenty of depth to it. Very cool way to end it - nicely done. Thank you very much Douglas! Nice to get a comment on the ending as well.
bjornpdx Posted January 26, 2019 Posted January 26, 2019 The song has a really nice atmosphere to it. I kept expecting something to fill in the pauses but you have a bit of a minimalist approach going in the song, which I think works well. I wanted another clue to what Mary's plan was since there's some ominous stuff going on, but I think you intended for the listener to make up a story for themselves. 1
kloon Posted January 27, 2019 Author Posted January 27, 2019 5 hours ago, bjornpdx said: The song has a really nice atmosphere to it. I kept expecting something to fill in the pauses but you have a bit of a minimalist approach going in the song, which I think works well. I wanted another clue to what Mary's plan was since there's some ominous stuff going on, but I think you intended for the listener to make up a story for themselves. Thank you very much Bjorn for listening and your kind words! Yeah, thats pretty much my songwriting in a nutshell. I very seldom reveal the main plot i plain words. It's always up to the listener. Personally, i find that kind of songwriting more interesting.
Philip G Hunt Posted January 27, 2019 Posted January 27, 2019 Very nice! Top notch production. Really first class. What is the effect on the vocals? A subltle vocoder? I'm guessing that this is already out there as a single. So you can't go back to it, right? 1
kloon Posted January 27, 2019 Author Posted January 27, 2019 7 minutes ago, 53mph said: Very nice! Top notch production. Really first class. What is the effect on the vocals? A subltle vocoder? I'm guessing that this is already out there as a single. So you can't go back to it, right? Thank you very much for your kinds words! No fx other than Waves Cla Vocals on the vocals. Yes, it's already out but i welcome all feedback for future songs.
Philip G Hunt Posted January 31, 2019 Posted January 31, 2019 Hi Kloon, sorry to take so long to reply - work, work, work. Around mark 0:48 & 1:24 for example it sounds like there might be pitch correction going on - I know that these days a lot of singers pull off that sound in their delivery, so it may just be the way you're singing. I don't mind it, but in moderation (like Cher 'Do you Believe in Love'....OK probably not the comparison you were looking for ) I love the harmonies around 3:40 My one crit is that I would have loved to have heard the song take off in another direction. It feels like it's building up to something big, but never quite kicks off. A soaring key change? A tempo shift? It's a solid song though - sounds like it could be on a soundtrack. Great job! 1
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