kakku Posted December 6, 2019 Share Posted December 6, 2019 (edited) Hi. This one is just about year old I think. I hope you like it and I welcome comments. Edited December 6, 2019 by kakku Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
congalocke Posted December 7, 2019 Share Posted December 7, 2019 Extremely gentle song. nice break and key change... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted December 7, 2019 Author Share Posted December 7, 2019 4 hours ago, congalocke said: Extremely gentle song. nice break and key change... Thank you 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makke Posted December 8, 2019 Share Posted December 8, 2019 pleasant sounds and cheerful ambiance on this instrumental tune. nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted December 8, 2019 Author Share Posted December 8, 2019 1 hour ago, Makke said: pleasant sounds and cheerful ambiance on this instrumental tune. nice job. Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted December 8, 2019 Share Posted December 8, 2019 It starts very abruptly, you might add some space to the very front. I like your tunes. On this one I'm hearing some interesting percussion adds, some claps and such. I think something to look around for might be a different hi hat, which seems to be predictable and at the same volume every hit. The cymbal also has a mechanical quality. What are you using for drums? Don't get me wrong, these hi-hats and cymbals work in what I think your genre is, and basically are a part of your style. But if you are looking for a different sonic world, you might start experimenting with those. There are more organic possibilities. cheers Kakku, another happy winner! -Tom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted December 8, 2019 Author Share Posted December 8, 2019 30 minutes ago, emeraldsoul said: It starts very abruptly, you might add some space to the very front. I like your tunes. On this one I'm hearing some interesting percussion adds, some claps and such. I think something to look around for might be a different hi hat, which seems to be predictable and at the same volume every hit. The cymbal also has a mechanical quality. What are you using for drums? Don't get me wrong, these hi-hats and cymbals work in what I think your genre is, and basically are a part of your style. But if you are looking for a different sonic world, you might start experimenting with those. There are more organic possibilities. cheers Kakku, another happy winner! -Tom Thanks for the analysis. I think you are correct. I might try fixing this when I am able again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Douglas Kirby Posted December 8, 2019 Share Posted December 8, 2019 It's a cool groove and I enjoyed the melodies of the lead synth. I thought the mix could use a bit more punch, if that makes sense - it's a bit too subdued. I agree with emeraldsoul about the drums - a bit too much of the same is the same - they could use a bit more variety - perhaps bring in the ride at some point. Anyway, thanks for posting - cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kakku Posted December 8, 2019 Author Share Posted December 8, 2019 19 minutes ago, Douglas Kirby said: It's a cool groove and I enjoyed the melodies of the lead synth. I thought the mix could use a bit more punch, if that makes sense - it's a bit too subdued. I agree with emeraldsoul about the drums - a bit too much of the same is the same - they could use a bit more variety - perhaps bring in the ride at some point. Anyway, thanks for posting - cheers. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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