Dancing with Debbie - A Work in Progress

[Chaps]

I've been fiddling with this one for months. Lots of things in it I am not happy with but can't seem to get it right. Maybe someone could offer a suggestion that will create an epiphany for me and help me on my way. All comments welcome.

https://soundclick.com/song/15155752

Edited yesterday at 01:48 AM by Chaps

[Larry T.]

Nice melodies arranged really well. Dreamy vibe that grabs the listener right off. The vocal sounds good a bit up front, the way you have it. Nice chorus kicks in about 2:30. Nice guitar solo's. Nice fade on the outro.

I'm hearing the right channel a lot louder than the left for the first minute or so. The balance gets a bit better around 2:00. I think the song needs work on the mix levels and stereo balance. A bit of work on the instruments EQ'ing as well. The drums all seem to be panned 80% right. Really cool song. Enjoyed it.