Dancing with Debbie - A Work in Progress

[Chaps]

I've been fiddling with this one for months. Lots of things in it I am not happy with but can't seem to get it right. Maybe someone could offer a suggestion that will create an epiphany for me and help me on my way. All comments welcome.

https://soundclick.com/song/15155752

Edited 38 minutes ago by Chaps