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Not Just To Breathe With You -- Drywater, Mars Part 5


Amberwolf

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This one is almost completely different from the others in the Drywater, Mars series; I left a couple of bits of sound here and there, including one ending vocalization, to tie it in to the others.   No huge orchestral percussion, a closer more intimate (but not really quiet) sound.

 

Every story has it's intimate scenes; this is one between two of our hero crew, as the ship drifts in zero g on course to the station.

POV outside ship, pan from station across the cold emptiness of space, turns back toward ship drifting straight towards camera, rapidly approaching the ship filling the screen until the window onto the interior is all we can see.  Music pauses just for an instant as we pass thru the window into the room, where two crew are just floating into the room, one following the other.   One reaches the far wall, pushes gently back, meets the other and both motions counteract and they stop, floating in the room, reaching for each other, touching each others faces, almost in wonder.   POV closeups on their faces, alternating one to the other as the music swaps back and forth, this continues:   Practiced nullgrav motions let them embrace, retreat, caress, clothing drifts away beyond them as you watch their emotions and sensations written across their faces, still alternating, sometimes both in view, as they rotate with the POV, all the way thru the interaction to the usual conclusion....

 



Not Just To Breathe With You -- Drywater, Mars Part 5

https://amberwolf.bandcamp.com/track/not-just-to-breathe-with-you-drywater-mars-part-5

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(posted to a new thread out of the original based on advice from Bajan Blue)

 

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