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Mix crits... Does this song need a bass?


SuperFreq

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Hey I'm working on a song and wondering if I should add bass. Here's a snippet.

The idea was to keep it small, currently it's just drums, guitar, keys & vocals. But I feel like the bottom end is empty. Or is it just me? General crits & comments are welcome too!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1GoDbZHospsaZ1WObpqiFO0z2DvtUp4Jk/view?usp=sharing

 

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10 hours ago, DaveT2 said:

I am not listening to it on the best of speakers, but it seems to be missing something in the bottom. Either a bass or a synth drone.  

Kind of has a Yes/ Starcastle sound to it.

You just named my fave band (Yes) and although I'm not well versed in Starcastle I've heard the name a lot in prog circles. Thanks!

 

1 hour ago, msmcleod said:

The first verse sounds fine without bass - it's a good contrast to the intro, but I'd bring one in after that.

 

Yup I definitely wanted a contrast between the intro & first verse without coming to a full stop, so I'm glad you noticed! Originally I thought I could carry the rest of the song that way, but I think you're right. At some point it needs to build back up and bass would do it. Maybe not an actual bass guitar but I'll experiment with a synth drone like Dave suggested. The "bass" in the intro is sorta that: a low note on organ enhanced with an octave subsynth.

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