I created a song that wasn't a dirge "Miter Saw"

[DaveT2]

This song started as a background music for a video about a modification on my miter saw and it kept growing.  Kind of a boppy tune. Not sure about the mix yet, but I wanted to put it out there and get some feedback.  All instruments are me except drums (midi loop) and strings (arpeggiator).  Enjoy!!

 

[Bajan Blue]

Hi

My main comment re the mix, is I found the Drums and Bass to be a little buried

The other instruments came through very prominently, perhaps too much so

Apart from that, good track

Nigel

 

[DaveT2]

Bajan Blue thanks for listening and for your feedback. I have  updated my system to some better monitors so I am going to revisit the mix. I will repost if I think I have improved it.

 

Thanks again

Dave T

[Wookiee]

Have to agree with Nigel, the Kick and other drum parts are lost in the mix, the kick lacks real punch and the snare is a little too forward. Bass not so much buried but not balanced with the rest. Just my two Triganic Pu.

It has potential though.

[DaveT2]

@wookiee, @Bajan Blue
I created a new mix. I have new monitors so I am not sure of my mix yet. I brought up the kick drum and the bass and backed off a bit on the lead guitar. Feedback is appreciated.