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This is charming. It's a bit like XTC meets Steely Dan. Chord changes that are intriguing, weird in places, yet it works.

I feel like the percussion hits a little too hard without any sense of flow to smooth it out. It kinds of clomps along to my ears. Maybe that's by design, I dunno, but it struck me. (No pun intended.)

I wanted to jump into a lyrical analysis, but this is a recording site, not a songwriting site.

That said, the production is stellar. The mix blends so well, everything works. The drums are my only thought.

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Thank you for the great comment!  About the drums, I agree I struggled with them.  I kept taking little pieces out throughout the process.  I want to try to make drums interesting where I can, I probably still overdid it!  The original lyric was 'the sky' but it was too tempting to turn it into 'this guy'. 🙂

 

Steve

 

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