Bapu Posted June 16 Share Posted June 16 (edited) Vocals, Atmosphere & Synths - Tom L Guitars - Lynn Wilson Final Synth Solo - Daryl Greenway Drums - Hugo Ribeiro Bass, Piano, Organ, Composer, Producer - Ed "bapu" Kocol The Fall Of Our Kind Intro: Verse 1: In the shadows of the city Concrete meets the sky A super symphony of progress Where humanity starts to die Verse 2: Neon lights and flashing screens We’re blinded by the globe Lost in a digital dream As our souls begin to erode Chorus: The fall of our kind With our new elected we're left behind All of our kind, we must fall And we'll leave all that behind Leave ourselves behind Verse 3: We were born to be wild Now we're just caged animals But the concrete city Answer to the cold winds cattle call Oh ooh ooooh Repeat Chorus: Guitar Solo: Repeat Verse 2 as Bridge: Repeat Chorus x 2: Keys solo: Outro: Edited June 17 by Bapu 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonoBrainer Posted June 17 Share Posted June 17 Aaaah. That was fun. Appreciate the musicianship, swell guitar work. Nice vocal delivery!!! A bit sibilant in the esses, I was listening on decent earbuds. The bass came through nicely. Your lyrics are wrong? Isn't it "caged animals"? The chorus sticks. Well done y'all. 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynn Wilson Posted June 17 Share Posted June 17 From embryo to maturity, this song has gone through quite an evolution. The fact that it got finished at all is due to Ed's patience and persistence. I'm happy to have been a part of this project! Congratulation, Ed! 4 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
michaelhanson Posted June 18 Share Posted June 18 (edited) Nice tune, well done by all! Typical excellent Bapu production. How do you guys get Sound Cloud to embed in the Cakewalk forum? It’s very easy on other sites, but I’ve tried everything here and can just not figure it out. I asked this on my tune as well, if it’s more appropriate to reply there. Edited June 18 by michaelhanson 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SUPAREELS Posted June 18 Share Posted June 18 Loads of work here, so well done! I listened to it a few times now and the production must have been a nightmare the construction of this song is IMV 2nd to none .. Well done Ed for being so tenacious think it payed off in spades. Steve SRM 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
57Gregy Posted June 23 Share Posted June 23 I like it! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ross Smithe Posted June 26 Share Posted June 26 Nice work on this Ed and all! 😎👏👏🎶🎶🎶🎶 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steve@baselines.com Posted June 27 Share Posted June 27 Sounds great - the collab works nicely! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gswitz Posted Tuesday at 12:58 AM Share Posted Tuesday at 12:58 AM Enjoyed it. Ty 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keith Wilby Posted Tuesday at 12:04 PM Share Posted Tuesday at 12:04 PM What an epic song that is. Very nice work indeed. If I may have one very minor comment, to me it seems like the vocals are sitting on top of the rest of the mix in the first verse. Everything evens out after that. Certainly one to be proud of. I struggle with lyrics, I think these will provide some inspiration 🙂 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bajan Blue Posted Tuesday at 05:25 PM Share Posted Tuesday at 05:25 PM Hi All I really like this - great song and great playing - and of course, Ed's great mix Cool stuff Nigel 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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