timboalogo Posted September 15 Share Posted September 15 Here's a new song that took forever to put together. It's a 3-parter about a 25 year old still living the dream in his parents' basement. I'm not the greatest guitarist and would have liked for someone else to play the solos. Sorry but it clocks in at 7 and a half minutes, so it's a significant time investment. Please tell me what you think: Broken Flashback Rhymes phones gone dead, bloodshot eyes staring at tv trying not to think about tomorrow all day new tat on your sleeve, stoked to show it off to your best boys yo momma's been chewing out your ***** since you got up at three so you skateboarded down to the old factory up on main street drained a pint of jack behind the discount liquor store topped it off with the two blues you scored from markymarkjay finally feeling good, finally feeling mighty fine down at the park you seen the popo taking all the tents down now they walking the streets with dirty hands held out for change somebody stole your deck when you took a leak behind the weed shop icy cold and dark and a bummer walk back to mom and day you're living the dream, going on 25 in your parents' basement the future's here and it's darker than *****ing coal on the tv there's 2 rich old guys yelling and pointing fingers wonder which of them's gonna rule the *****ing world up to my ears in cash, benjamins floating down from the sky sitting on my skinny ***** sinking in a cocaine tidal wave busloads of drooling fans looking deader every day there will be no end to my personal carnival of pain high priests in gucci clothes hawking tickets to taylor swift pollyanna waving her broken flashback rhymes canvas of life revived oozing down cracked subway walls all my homeless soldiers slowly marching to hell mom and dad made me = in the back seat of an old chevy they were parked behind = my favourite liquor store life goes round and round = sometimes you hit the jackpot sometimes you hit the skids = and take it from behind not their fault the whole world was sliding into the dumpster the fault lies in the way we're all wired as best as i can tell so yeah i live in my parents *****ing 2 bit basement no hope no life might as well just roll another one mom and dad made me, made me, made me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted September 15 Share Posted September 15 Funky groove with a strong driving bass line that works well with the drums. Its a very clean, balanced mix, really liked the guitar tones and the vocals mixed well with the backing track. Good lyrics too. Nice job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timboalogo Posted September 16 Author Share Posted September 16 Thanks Kevin, a little too long IMO, but glad you liked the mix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin Walsh Posted September 16 Share Posted September 16 1 hour ago, timboalogo said: Thanks Kevin, a little too long IMO, but glad you liked the mix. Sometimes you need to take a bit of time to say what needs to be said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted September 18 Share Posted September 18 cool sound.jack c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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