bjornpdx Posted September 12 Share Posted September 12 I posted this a couple of years ago but didn't like it that much so this is a do over. I got the lyrics idea from an article about how to NOT write a blues song. For example the following lyrics don't fit the concept of a blues song: "My woman is insensitive to my needs" So that's the first line in my song. I used buzz words I found on the internet and I made up some of my own. Here's the rest of the lyrics: ============================================================================== Well my woman she's insensitive to my needs I said my woman she's insensitive to my needs I get no affirmation I get no focused communication I just can't take it any more -------------------------------- well my baby she don't respect my boundaries Yeah my baby she don't respect my boundaries I'm always the one to acquiesce cause she don't appreciate my uniqueness I'm so wired for love but there ain't no empathic connection I just can't take this any more ------------------------------------- gtr solo ---------------------------------------- my honey she don't know my love language Yeah my honey she don't know my love language we no longer set goals and achieve together no thoughtful gifts or genuine gestures so obvious We're on a codependent journey to consensual isolation I just can't take this any more No I can't take it any more -------------------------------------- my woman misinterprets my intentions I say my woman misinterprets my intentions I must lovingly express in words so simple she really must do an honest self appraisal hey I'm loving her bravely, but the sentiment it ain't reciprocated this can't go on any more can't take it, just can't take it no more ---------------------------------------------- 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack c. Posted September 12 Share Posted September 12 just the blues.cool.jack c 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerrydf Posted September 12 Share Posted September 12 Nice approach to the vocals (almost Colourblind James). Nice guitar work 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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